we suffer, who love

John what a beautiful romantic write

you will find me naked, blushing and waiting..

seducing ink..

with love Crim

Stunning piece. The reality of desirous love and the pain of loving, so clearly written here. My favorite one so far..

All we who love can hope is to find some meaning in the suffering, to survive and thus live to love again.

Beautiful write, John.

Fortunately or some would say unfortunately I'm feeling this now JF....

I doubt I have the literary qualifications but I believe this is a masterpiece.

i have nothing but tremulous sighs for this

So vivid. As if she was there and you were describing her...telling her those things. The ending was just so vulnerable and honest and true. Excellent.

'I must take you as I’ve taken you in my tainted
fantasies. my desperate craving is to hurt you, hurt you in
a carnal way  –  & there is nothing poetic in that.' Gosh, there is such a depth here. I want to remain icy cold and say things that are constructive and you could take on board but this just isn't the time nor the place. You make me want you, you sell this terribly well and there's such an ache for something great and eternally-binding. This is beautiful and an epic thing to join the reading list.

You are a modern day Casanova in a Fedora!!
always a true pleasure to read your work.
Thanks, JF

John, You must get published, You are one of the greatest writers i have ever read from... You poetry is,  if not better than  EAPo, and all the other famous poets! Your poetry is so good one can only wonder why you're not at Barnes and Nobles and other great venues!! I adore this ink because it really showcases your desire to love and be soft...   Out the park   and in the list Johnny Rotten! with love and respect   Jackie xoxoxox

I imagine any woman reading this would fall into your arms, suffering or no.  Fine work!

Feddler..Feddler... . I am starting to... well this lady that has you imbibing her well, in so many ways & you know the kinkiness of it all? it's not the typical ordinaire dull fleshly glow that given & taken, oh no .. for it is that of a rebirth in each touch & blow you sign on her. & she doesn't have to await her turn.... ... . she's your sensual focul I can sense you are a inspiration of inner & outtre dwellings from past to present.. but when someone else has inspired you to write, you must have of many pleasures to get it all out thru possibilities.. & thru ink blotting. This is so fucking  adoring & sexy because   ..   ...but  someone must be the sufferers in this world & it is us who lives in this. gateway   .. It is something which made me realize that we must be going thru the same things together in this very moment of our lives, for I do see twins in flames. So must form the sounds just to say.. this has never happened to me before with another, in depths of powerfulness,  its instinctively distinguishments --- - ....but...  when coming across the so fucking passionate about whatever it is until it pleasurably hurts..until all of bursts or becomes minced ..   do not mistake me loves we're not only referring to cunts & cocks because they swell, cum & go... I mean the whole of us Nothing compares my Knight ..Nothing Now with all of that being said.or rambled without choice .. I am a submittance of subtlety which appreciates so deeply your obtuseness, until the point it brings upon me melancholy & true happiness.. a very  very Rare thing.. to even say 'Rare' feels a bit foolish ..feels a bit elementary but my elements says otherwise A taste of sweet hell & heaven you give everytime, damn you my Cherished.. damn you..  forevermore

Sheesh what a clever opening! Had I been wearing a shirt when I read it, I'd be tempted to take it off! :)

"from your pent-up hair to your
concerned feet, attempting to hide in the sand." Brings to mind an image of someone so insecure and unsure of themselves, and yet, the rest of the poem aims such ardor at them it seems it's a "You don't know you're beautiful" sort of situation.

Sultry and seductive. Well done!

how the choiring shadows could not console you... I love this line, such desperation and darkness. Another beautiful, sexy piece.

The most romantic piece of read in days.
I love the tainted beauty of this piece.
and imagery is superb.

Amazing read!

Darker.

"Angry Fire" my my my how it burns...this was Exquisiste to say the least..Beautifully Done!!!

What a gorgeous write!

'And as I watch you, gentleness is lost and restraint. The fingers of my passion reach for you till you feel their angry fire.'

I absolutely love it. Spoken as someone who has been lucky enough to feel love's true unquenchable passion.

Bravo John!

Exquisite write JF - what an opening and humility