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His Insatiable
Feral night-stalking panther.. deep biting her neck
dragging her to black sheets.. tummy bent over bed.
Frenzied pulse dripping silk ..feeds his predator's gleam.
forcing head down sharply ..at teeth's sudden release
Big rough paws of prey.. taunt his plaything in [All]ways,
knee nudges 'tween hers- demanding wider display.
Gained ownership known ..skin-bitten, 'she-victim' lays..
Palms barely making contact- he thrives for her thrash,
fierce-cupping in squeeze, un-gently grooving skin's path.
Thumbs part palest creases, her ragged breath squeaks out,
his tongue sinks cunt-deep, firm lapping throaty wet growls..
adding thick-fingered traces ..melts wicked-slick pout.
Granting no mercy, his stubble slow-scrapes insides,
smooth long licks, almost-fist ...nibbles feast from behind.
He raises her dainty's.. cruciform'ed in harsh bend,
tight ass weighs this newest threat of thick sack and Him.
Pinned by his scent-mixing hips.. arms drop to her sides,
draping her back ..raw thrust claims this plaything is 'Mine!'
Teeth scrape slender throat, in-sync'ing each pound and choke,
passion pools her dark lashes.. gripping savage strokes.
Non-uttered 'mercy plea' ..she weeps only gushed dreams,
..'til panther makes her kitty purr, creaming his stream.
As no mercy was pleaded.. no quarter attained,
bodies collapse still connected.. sheets sweetly-stained.
'His Insatiable'.. begs.. "show No Mercy again?"
panther rolls her to face him.. and whispers.. "you win."
Published 14th Aug 2015
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14th Aug 2015 4:13am
Til panther makes her kitty purr..love love that line!! So provocative and hardcore! Love it!! 💕Sissy
15th Aug 2015 3:58pm
Sweetest Sissy.. thank you so much for your visit.. adore seeing you here!
your words & presence touch my heart & pen. much luvz lady dearest..
~d
your words & presence touch my heart & pen. much luvz lady dearest..
~d
14th Aug 2015 5:33am
the jungle screams. can feel the beast engaging & raging in untamed sex w/his seductive mate...
15th Aug 2015 5:13pm
"jungle screams".. I love that thought, awesome poet! .. this was indeed a rapturous paper trail ;)
always, you have my mushy adoration for takin time to read, SirJ.. tyty!
ever low & fondly in curtsy,
~d
always, you have my mushy adoration for takin time to read, SirJ.. tyty!
ever low & fondly in curtsy,
~d
14th Aug 2015 10:24am
ooooh all primal here with growls & purrs ...
"Big rough paws of prey.. taunt his plaything in [All]ways,
knee nudges 'tween hers- demanding wider display."
^^^^^
weak kneed there. yummy that & yummy this
xoxox
"Big rough paws of prey.. taunt his plaything in [All]ways,
knee nudges 'tween hers- demanding wider display."
^^^^^
weak kneed there. yummy that & yummy this
xoxox
15th Aug 2015 5:18pm
Omg m'sis.. you know.. I almost titled this 'primal mercy'..lol ..You are ever right in my brain
with sexy word-flavors..
will consider weak knead to be a win fer me, ty darlins K..
loves you in smooches & spanks [everly]
~d
with sexy word-flavors..
will consider weak knead to be a win fer me, ty darlins K..
loves you in smooches & spanks [everly]
~d
14th Aug 2015 1:39pm
15th Aug 2015 5:21pm
You are a gorgeous smile on my page luvies.. thanx so much for the read of lusty.. encounters! ;)
take care poetess.. hughug
~d
take care poetess.. hughug
~d
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Aug 2015 3:13pm
14th Aug 2015 2:37pm
Typical you.
15th Aug 2015 5:26pm
I am always in happy grin to have you here, Jerry.. thank you for leavin your mark on my page dearest!
respect & luvstufs by curtsy,
~T
respect & luvstufs by curtsy,
~T
14th Aug 2015 4:09pm
"He thrives for her thrash." Ha! He better hold on tight, panther or no. I love your erotic play Darksighs, and I'm thrilled that his insatiable one wins at the end. Your victory is sweet and complete!
15th Aug 2015 5:40pm
oh, my dear Sir of Crow.. I consider it a success when getting a 'ha' out of you.. ty much sweetie.
I appreciate your visit to my page of pounce.. Insatiable thrash mita worked title too.. hmm..lol.
Will be catchin up.. two days of pain did keepeth me from slaying words.. must make up for it obnoxiously today.. [solid plan..she smirks.]
be well hun,
~d
I appreciate your visit to my page of pounce.. Insatiable thrash mita worked title too.. hmm..lol.
Will be catchin up.. two days of pain did keepeth me from slaying words.. must make up for it obnoxiously today.. [solid plan..she smirks.]
be well hun,
~d
14th Aug 2015 11:29pm
What a helluva 'fight' lol...very steamy imagery, HARD not to think softly lol
15th Aug 2015 5:47pm
You are just a sweetie fer reading.. thanx so much misters!
fight is quite a good word too .. I shuda included somewheres.. lil grrrs & ha!
hope you have a great wknd, hugs..
~d
fight is quite a good word too .. I shuda included somewheres.. lil grrrs & ha!
hope you have a great wknd, hugs..
~d
15th Aug 2015 00:54am
lovely d~ yummy, delicious ink..
I agree with Katja scratching the primal itch in me..
with this sexy, sensual, hot erotic..
with love Crim
I agree with Katja scratching the primal itch in me..
with this sexy, sensual, hot erotic..
with love Crim
15th Aug 2015 6:00pm
My sweet Crim.. you are So getting pounced fer the read..
& fer being plain uplifting by comment..
loves you lotts lady & oh-so triple the hot thought of claws-
we gals must have sharp perspective, no?! *lmsao
'tween you & Katja.. I squirm aplenty! [woops.. naughty thots, see what ya'll do to me?] ;)
mwahs n awwws of ty,
~d
& fer being plain uplifting by comment..
loves you lotts lady & oh-so triple the hot thought of claws-
we gals must have sharp perspective, no?! *lmsao
'tween you & Katja.. I squirm aplenty! [woops.. naughty thots, see what ya'll do to me?] ;)
mwahs n awwws of ty,
~d
15th Aug 2015 2:53am
First Hello< So wonderfully written. You paint a perfect picture of
Our most primal needs to survive. Whether it is the hunt
of the prey to feed our hungry.
Or our need for each other> sex>love also a hunger to be satisfied.
Dark & so sexy, thanks hun for serving up
Keith
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Our most primal needs to survive. Whether it is the hunt
of the prey to feed our hungry.
Or our need for each other> sex>love also a hunger to be satisfied.
Dark & so sexy, thanks hun for serving up
Keith
I
15th Aug 2015 8:07pm
Hihi's! What a font of poetic comment, you've left on my page, sweetie. ty.
& I cudn't agree more with your break down of "our most primal needs to survive"..
we all own them & shud indulge/spoil em- I say, or suffer boredom & blah.. ;)
I truly appreciate your acknowledgement of the emotional depth in my works, aside from the ..um..
other interesting verbs & such. [smirks]
good day to misters Keith!
~d
& I cudn't agree more with your break down of "our most primal needs to survive"..
we all own them & shud indulge/spoil em- I say, or suffer boredom & blah.. ;)
I truly appreciate your acknowledgement of the emotional depth in my works, aside from the ..um..
other interesting verbs & such. [smirks]
good day to misters Keith!
~d
Anonymous
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16th Aug 2015 2:38am
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18th Aug 2015 1:34am
You are the goddess of squirm y'know? geezes, sweet Taryn.. will add that title to my numerous list of sexy titles I gots going for you ;) *meow says it all! ..cuz ur squirm is also contagious as hellz..
sweet thanky-kisses m'lovely sis Of the Faerie Kink!
~d
sweet thanky-kisses m'lovely sis Of the Faerie Kink!
~d
16th Aug 2015 5:05am
Ahhh, darksighs, luv ~ :-*
This elicits thoughts of primeval conquering and what, mayhap, is best is that both can be and are conquered and conquering... ;-*
The rawness of this earthy, uninhibited dance imbues the very atmosphere with seductive pheromonal scents releasing untamed beasts from civilized society's cages once again.
Ahhh, artiste savant, you are a gift, you know... :-*
This elicits thoughts of primeval conquering and what, mayhap, is best is that both can be and are conquered and conquering... ;-*
The rawness of this earthy, uninhibited dance imbues the very atmosphere with seductive pheromonal scents releasing untamed beasts from civilized society's cages once again.
Ahhh, artiste savant, you are a gift, you know... :-*
18th Aug 2015 2:00am
Omg.. Lady*S of my fantasy pages..
you are a delight of drippy comment, & I do humbly bow [is low & prone ok?]
oh so good of u to mention those pheromones.. sweet lush pleasures there.. a-greed! plus- u Always say it better than I cud ..ur 'raw/earthy'..
I'm jus sittin here, goin- .. "yesyes she knows".. lol
luvzu muchly,
~d
you are a delight of drippy comment, & I do humbly bow [is low & prone ok?]
oh so good of u to mention those pheromones.. sweet lush pleasures there.. a-greed! plus- u Always say it better than I cud ..ur 'raw/earthy'..
I'm jus sittin here, goin- .. "yesyes she knows".. lol
luvzu muchly,
~d
17th Aug 2015 6:27am
Thought i had you followed. Remedied.
Mmm, delicious work.
Panther rolls her face to him
You win
I, ........no words. None needed. Because its just so purrrrrfucked.💋
Mmm, delicious work.
Panther rolls her face to him
You win
I, ........no words. None needed. Because its just so purrrrrfucked.💋
18th Aug 2015 2:26am
Sweet you- Luvin thanx, Lady Jen, you are a treasure to my page! *mwahs fer the follow too ;)
and this..? ~> "purrrrrfucked".. is why *I follow *you! lovely word, tyty.
~d
and this..? ~> "purrrrrfucked".. is why *I follow *you! lovely word, tyty.
~d
19th Aug 2015 1:37pm
