Dirty Secret

Fucking hot write... That's all I can say.

thank you Kitty for a wickedly great comment :)

with love Crim

smiling wide at you beautiful Taryn thank you for making my day :)

with love Brenda

somebody knows that you know his name. you're gonna burn down a lot of fantasies, Crim...

thank you John though I don't want to burn down any fantasies :) could be any man ;)

with love Crim

Mmmm, you lusting little lovely lass.  
Brutal honesty conveyed with heated desire.

I've a box for you, tick......tock.          
How long shall you wait?  ;)      

How long might I keep you confined, restrained, wanting?    
*evil grin*    
you know,
Chad

thank you Chad for making blush wildly as I giggle..

keep me confined the longer the better knowing you await me ;)

with love Brenda

Smoking. I should've waited to take that cold shower.

thank you Sir Hades for the hot comment :)

with love Crim

you are just so good at this - you are virtually the only erotic writers that I am happy to read - it is such a sexy write, something you would think most me would consider ideal. As for me, well, I am a cuddle guy - in my past I was an insane fuck fan, I now thrive on gentle touch and warm hugs, funny how things can change. excellent write to me back to my fuck fan days (lol)

thank you David for such a great comment..

happy I could take you back to those days ;)

with love Crim

A  thrilling ride.  A brave woman who is not afraid of her sexuality and can handle the sub role or dom role...but she really desires is a breathtaking challenge into her own needs.

thank you lovely one for such an insightful comment..

with love Crim

You'd be quite a handful if I ever wanted to assume the Dominant position.  In my dreams!  I love this Crim, you sweet and filthy little beast.  Just can't get enough...

thank you Sir Crow loved you wicked comment ;)

with love Crim

Are you talking to me ?
Taking the street cred, why the fuck not ???

This is your opus

Broken Glass Like

xx

Poet of course I am you'd definitely be the man to put this lady in her place ;)

with love and lust Brenda

Unholiest of fuks.. you have excited me to No ends with this one, gal!
So hot and bold, sassy-bitch-in-stilettos sharp, even. You- on the prowl, is a devilishly gorgeous thing, Lady Crim!
Low grrrz to the secret tuck away, but *Adore the way you handle your business.. hotly & w/class, of course! winx*

"the hunt, the chase       <~best ever ..is this dark fun.very.
you want a submissive      
this conjures the beast in me"       <~ your hot prowl.. *my gush.. as I sed. ;)
     
"I'm the cum stain      
on the walls of your mind      
something tangible "
~cannot even 'splain[here] why this one hits so hard.. but just *know that it does!  

"ride me into the ground      
teach this cunt to listen      
when a silent command is given"
~raw & rough makes beautiful.. and *you did this. love it.  
so pleasured to have the honor to read you..
ever in low curtsy a'purrrs,
~d      
     

lovely d~ thank you for such an in depth comment..

which is pure magic and poetry in it's self..

blushing wildly with a wicked smile on my face..

from your thoughts on this ink..

with love Crim :)

Wow, I thought you said you'd take OUR SECRET to the grave!!??
Lmao... Yea I know, don't I wish I had this effect on you lol...

Poe I would want you to be gentle with me ;)

you affect me deeply in your own right love you Crim

   
I'll follow you anywhere      
keep me boxed up      
your dolly to be played with   <<<<    
>>>> JEEZEZ Take The Wheel!!!
holy fuck crim, what a ride!!!!
Zazzles

in the list !!

thank you beautiful Jackie for making my morning..

I love you lady Crim :)

Damn girl you got me fucked up telling myself secrets with this write! I didn’t have any until I read this shit, now I don’t even know who I am anymore. WOW!!

so glad you enjoyed :)

your secrets are safe with me ;)

no worries with love Crim

It is honey to my ears Crim.

thank you Xmar for your receiving of this offering..

with love Crim

"I have eyes for you
though you find no fascination in me"
^^^^^
oh there you go again, breaking my lil black heart with all too familiar ache that takes residence beneath my breast so frequently
*
you are such a gifted poetess, darling brenda; evoking such visceral responses from me with your ink...
"yes darlin sighing deeply
ride me into the ground
teach this cunt to listen
when a silent command is given
coming for you now
I'm sated by your pen
that penetrates all of my orifices"
^^^^^
... that is often worth the trouble that comes with being an inkwell for a gentleman poet; they wring you dry but it's wondrous
*
loved this. truly.

beautiful Katja you have me blushing wildly with a big smile on my face..

thank you for such a heartfelt comment..

you affect me deeply to stirring passions in me to learn this art..

so beautifully you paint with words leaving deep impressions..

I love you Brenda

Sexy little Secret! You scorch the minds of many with your fervent ink, and mine is no exception. Love it, sincerely, blue angel

thank you beautiful Angel..

love you lady Crim

Luv luv luv. Exept my dear for using the word rape. We may have fettish, a need for play. But be careful. We have an audience here. I know, you know where those lines are. There are assholes out there that do not. But most of this, fucking glorious. 💋

thank you beautiful one for you gorgeous comments on this write..

I get you on that word, I guess it troubles me a bit too..

though I don't know how to re-phrase my fervent need..

thank you with love Crim

Your dolly to be played with. Holy mother of fuckers yes.💋

This just keeps cumming to me. The cum stains on the walls of your mind! Shit doll. Fucking genius. 💋

Your sated pen penetrates all of my...keep me in a box ...until you are ready to....  Crim you are a phenom woman!  This poem is off-the-chain.  So hot. So brave.  You go there and then free flow off the cliff.  A rough ride but an enjoyable one.

you give the best comments Shauna I thank you graciously :)

with love Brenda