Aborted Seed

A lot of deep dark feelings. Can feel it with every word 😁

thank you DC with love Crim

The sins of the mother are never quite destroyed, for better or worse.  This reminds me of a short story by Harlan Ellison called "Croatoan."  Can't recommend this one highly enough.  Same with "Aborted Seed."  Great job Crim!

thank you Sir Crow for an insightful, beautiful comment and book recommendation with love Crim

Crim, there is no other poet on this planet quite like you.  I have missed reading these aching, compelling poems!  This is grim, powerful, exquisite and chilling.  I have always thought about that monster that lurked in Bundy's head, how he must have hated but coveted him.  We all have something lurking there...

yes I've also wondered the same thing about Bundy.. thank you for such an awesome comment humbling me with love Crim

beautiful Taryn I'm not going lovely one.. just feeling some guilt.. you're right shining a light on my writing not being the cause of what people may do.. thank you sweet heart with love Brenda :)

Wow Crim......my words are stunned by this powerful piece......emotions I felt thru this one is unreal......it's like I could hear you reading it and crying while i listened......you're the best at these kind of inks......but I think you're too hard on your beautiful soul......luv and hugs xo :)

lovely Flower thank you beautiful one for understanding with love Crim :)

"the innocent ones  
putting down my wicked pen  
for the moment"
~well, I.. for one [of Many].. sweet-fuckings *Love* your wicked pen!
the innocent ones.. and the setting free of/aborting even.. is pure darkened thought
but your conscience  show brightly also.. a change coming, maybe..adore pondering it.

"there will be no more  
born of my demonically desecrated cunt  
I've aborted the seed "
&...
"it still runs rabid in the sewers  
where it was flushed  
a stillborn thought let it never see light"
~stillborn.. yet... still 'summon-able' Thought.. I'd hope? [she asks, all shiny eyed & hopeful].. eg..;)
cuz.. I get so attached to mine[thots], sinister or not..

the sheer dark smokey presence you birth in this piece is a shiver-tingle in my macabre lil heart..
wicked luvz, LadyCrim.. you are fine by shadows here.. *mwahs
~d
 
 

lovely d~ thank you for such a beautiful take on this write

showing my dark thoughts love

I live in the shadows it would be hard for me to transition to the light

thank you again for such a thoughtful comment with love Crim

demons in the sewers, we hope they stay confined there. hardcore write, Crim...

thank you John with love Crim

jaysus lawd brenda!! this is next level macabre indeed...
"I've aborted the seed
it still runs rabid in the sewers
where it was flushed
a stillborn thought let it never see light"
^^^^^^^^
... fuck me charles manson, i absolutely loved those lines

xoxox

beautiful Katja thank you for making me smile so wickedly with your comment ;) love you lady Brenda

Damn, Mia took the same lines I was bout to quote! :( lol STILL I concur with the masses... Ur 'seed' maybe dark n deadly, but I'll be damned if it ain't grippingly powerful!! :)

thank you Poe for visiting me in the shadows love you Crim :)

Brenda, this is so powerful.. and brilliant.. just love this one.. into the list it goes.. much love, and respect..



Dave

thank you Dave you're making me blush :)

with love Brenda

Crimson nightmares   Written in every way   The fucking truth unfolded   With all your decay     The beauty of your work is the sincerity of it. I find more truth hiding in darkness than I do in the plain view of light.     The ink is flawless within the cracks it was made

thank you Soul for such a beautifully dark comment..

yes I too take shelter in the shadows :)

with love Crim

You astound me every time. My darlin, i happen to find your pen filled with worth, pain, but beauty. Aborted. That seed is not gone until its pain and torment are gone from you. I hope that for you. Truely. 💋

beautiful Jennifer thank you for the gorgeous, insightful comment..

with love Brenda