Skeletal Ideas

lovely Taryn thank you for saying talent doesn't disappear..    I've gotten out the habit of writing and am trying to find my feet again..    beautiful lady appreciate your most gracious comments on this write love Brenda :)

thank you beautiful with love Brenda :)

thank you kindly Gabriel with love Crim :)

gimme a second to kick someone off my list... lacking finesse... that's mayhap the only nonesense there's no truth in *mutter mutter grumble*
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"bare, raw, honesty
standing naked before you
no stunning metaphors
to cover my depravity
splayed, an open cunt
to be reveled in or defiled "
^^^^^^
fuck the metaphors! fuck 'em all imho.
as someone once said to me, "i love the bones of you"... i love the bones of you & your gritty ink spills, darling one xoxox

beautiful Katja you are the stars that I gaze at in wonder.. you bless my heart with the love you bestow upon me.. I am humbled and so honored this made your list.. smiling wide at you lovely one :) thank you for showing me the beauty in my ink with love Brenda

GREAT JOB. I love how expressive the words are, it speaks for itself

thank you kindly with love Crim :)

"no stunning metaphors
to cover my depravity
splayed, an open cunt"
~this is...puurfect!! as raw/open as can be.. no metaphor needed, your pen just flows of stark truths here.

"I want to captivate
with brutal honesty
dazzle with my tapestry of ink"
 ~oh, darlin.. you dazzled alrighty.. then wowed me in visual purity of the honest word.(welcomed by some or not)

I'm thinkin'.. you have such afluent word use, that by end line..I'm offering to light your smoke;) lol.
the sharp angles work so well to mean business m'friend.. be well, sweet LadyCrim, enjoyed.
~d

lovely ~d so touched and humbled by your take on my writing.. thank you for showing me love..

had me giggling too with your offer to light my smoke..

in a bit of a self-deprecating mood today you lifted me out of it with your beautiful comment

thank you again with love Crim

You're good at expressing feelings through words. It works really well here, good job :)

thank you kindly with love Crim

Sweet Crim.......you lack nothing......everything you write is another reflection of you we get to see and luv......wonderful write Sweet Lady......xo :)

thank you beautiful Flower feeling a little better today with love Crim :)

poetry is your weapon, Crim, you use it to carve your emotions into our skin...

thank you for such an enlightening comment which is poetry all it's own with love Crim

Amzing Theatrical Emotional Work here My Lovely Crim!!!


As Always... your writing is Book Worthy....
Power Pen Praise!!!

Fire

thank you lovely Fire for warming my heart with your comment with love Crim

I can't imagine your ink being lacking at all mamactia..... Metaphors and straight talk are all good as long as you say what you need to and say it well and you say it in such a profound manner. .....I'm enjoying you Crim ; )

Lena you made me smile wide with your comment beautiful one thank you with love Crim

Beautiful! Well done :D

thank you kindly Demon greetings.. with love Crim

I don't mind the absence of metaphors, polish and finesse at all.  They would just get in your way.  You've still got an obvious skill with words, but I love you for your savagery and refusal to compromise.  Skeletal ideas?  These look pretty fleshed out to me.  Great job Crim!

thank you Sir Crow for loving me as is.. really touches my heart with love Crim :)

Brenda, this is amazing work.. i think you've go your magic back.. not that you ever lost it.. i love the pure unadulterated truth, you've been displaying lately.. just an awesome job.. great work keep writing, and i'll keep reading.. into the list it goes.. much love and respect... Dave

thank you Dave for making my day with your beautiful comment and showing me love with love Brenda :)

loved this poem despite it's deliberate directness - certainly no subtlety - that's what gives it it's power, that and the skilful way you construct your words - as usual  simply brilliant :-)

thank you David I always enjoy your thoughts and visits with love Crim

naked and true...you sure do dazzle

thank you kind Hash :) with love Crim

YUM.  I see this gorgeous poem the narrator speaking to a man and also you speaking to the readers [or some of] them at Deep. You are taking off the clothes your soul is usu. clothed in to be seen really seen.  Refusing to hide behind poetry techniques ...your honesty comes through and your pointed
edgy pen beautiful and dangerous much like her owner.

thank you lovely Shauna for such gorgeous, insightful comments :)

with love Brenda