Kerosened Consequences

Flick light exhale stutter. The rythym, the staccato, it all just comes together masterfully. You make rhyme your bitch. Favorite piece I've read today. 💋

Sweetest omfg's to you lady, you had me smilin' first thing this morn.. thank you very much!
I soo appreciate the read and your takin' time ;)
shiny day to you,
~d

What a superb piece of writing, dark. Each line makes a statement in the first half and then answers it in the second half. Jeez! This is amazing to say the very least. My favorite line came quickly . . . "Cannot one macabre moment mean~ un-damned, un-seen, un-stalked?"

Very much enjoy your presence and comments misters.. aand.. you're right, I *do answer myself here.. *devious ha-ha's..imagine that, huh?! ..will thank my strong coffee muse this morn 'cuz ..I'm way caffeinated btw.. lol.
great day to you m'dears ; )
~d

Oh ..sniffle & shineys.. wif lil grrs..*Now you've dunnit, sweet sissy Taryn..
 got mushy-me, going..*kisses to you fer that support...I am *gd determined to have a "best as possible today".. despite the body bs..yes ma'am ;)
we shall share a drink a'fore you knowitt, *squeezin' ur hand darlins,
~d

You really seem to enjoy the macabre and don't appreciate intrusions.  "Awaiting fate's cruel body break."  That line did it for me, given my own ongoing health concerns.  I really like the way this is framed by the first and last stanza.  Fine job Darksighs!

Sweet sir.. macabre in dabbles are always lovely .. hell,.. it really 'is a splendid flavor word, right? winx
(im a dork, yes..*grin)
Was a good release this morn, body pain just suxx.. hugs that you relate.. i wish none did, tall order tho.
ty very much for your dear time, will always appreciate your presence, Sirs of Crow ;)
best of days to you~
~d

Your poem singed the hairs on my arms. Your fumes are dangerously close to igniting. I love that first line, "tick tock by the deviled clock". Time is a whore who has her way with everyone. Pay attention to the second hand.

Well met and agrees on Time-whore.. I like that one..;)   Eyes on sneaky seconds, just in case.. rofls.
always do look forward to my wit-fully evoked smile at your comments, ty m'friend, best timin for those! ;)
have a great day,
~d

The second stanza... Wows miss. An emotional ride to be sure.
Best whishes poet.

You, sir, are ever sweet to find on my page w/kind words, I thank you greatly!
shiny wishes to you m'dear ;)
~d

gawdamn, playing my feeble heartstrings this afternoon, no?
i love the rhythm of this one, sis, like a long, shuddering breath after soul cries...
"awaiting fate's cruel body break, *flick.. light.. exhale..
Stutter. "
... i see the shaky fingers clutch there
#transatlantichugs
xoxox

" like a long, shuddering breath after soul cries."
~you a'shiver me with your words daily luvinsKat..
hugs upon land & water sissy.. ~~> ..'ain't no mountain hi enuf'.. y'know, as the song goes...
I jus' refuse to sing it. lmsao*
ty fer stoppin fer my wine & cheese ;) ha.
curtsies & kisses m'doll,
~d

i can tell your pen was on fire when you written this piece... awesome delivery DS :)

I sweetly curtsy to your read, mister Magics!
much obliged, as was a 'blah' day.. writing does help..;)
great day to you m'friend,
~d

lovely ~d the whole poem rocked me to my core

the ending really delivers so artistically dark and masterful

Second, minute, hour a'blazed.. I'm tick-tocked by deviled clock..
One macabre moment cannot mean.. Undamned. Unseen. Unstalked.

stunning beautiful poetess with love Crim

Hihi's my daring LadyCrim & her pen!
I get smiles just getting your feedback sweetie..trying to write away these
crappy days.. inspiration is a stubborn bitch, yes? lmsao.. (oh yes)
loves you much & be catchin up my reads today.. and yes- you are on my list! ;)
hughug
~d

a calumny of concourse.....good gawd

you elicit too much co
                             mm
                             ent
                             ary , aye jestifiably ass'ess, prequellantly

Many thanx, Sirz o D.. hope you get a lil beach dip in fer me this week! (subliminal wish sent) lol.
You warm me with your works wording & more-so in comment & friendship, thx darlin ;)..
curtsies & hugs
~d

Great write, Darksighing one.

Grinning because I'd know it were you by the name you use for me.. & I very much like it, ty.
missed your works & so glad to say hihi to a friend.. great nite to you.. fall moons approach,
my fellow moongazer.. can' wait !
~d

Ooh my darling darkling sigh, how eerie feeling this inklet is!

Just want to quote the whole thing but shan't.. for it will be hard to rest on this night after your words

Giving you embracement deeply,
can we huddle together? These mad stalking entities & hours are terrifying, I know