Mascara runs

I hope your dreams come true Darksighs.  This one couldn't be hotter.  A "silk-wrapped fist" and "lips full of beg" are among many details that set my fevered thoughts going.  Your mascara might run but it's a small price to pay.  You did a great job with this.

Sweetest ever, sirs of crow, to see you hear.. pardon the black streaked eyes, will you? (ty)
I am grateful fer the read.. dreams sure can gut punch these days.. especially *these.
appreciate the added hope, shiny eyes just hurt..
hughug
~d

Wow.  Wasn't created babe, I can assure you that.  Only some sick self-sabotaging sadist would create something that would cause himself this much pain.  As your  poetic cadence streamlines more with each write, your words seem to dig that much deeper into the souls of your readers.  Cutting words here.  Very well done.

Michael

we all read into differently so will leave this open to welcome all interps.
when love creates hurts..there should be a magick *reset switch fer those. I'd advocate.
 am grateful you see improvement in my verse, ty fer that. We both know it soothes what all else cannot.
take care of yourself Michael,
sweet dreams love,
~T

Apologies if I misinterpreted Dark,  I get confused when you write poems that make it seem like you've been abandoned when I was right there with you the morning you were writing it.  If you hadn't told me the poem was about me, mayhap at I wouldn't have taken it so personal.  Still good work.
 
Michael
 

stay off my page with hurtful drama laced so sweetly.. I'd appreciate the word abuse to finally stop from you.
I know well what I write about & it's My pain.. not what you see apparently.. but that's fine with me.
best wishes to you Michael.. for what love we had for so long & the peace you cannot honor.
replies shud be only about poetry or critique.
~d

I wish I had something intelligent to say other than the fact
that you are so masterful in creating such sensual imagery.
once again I love to read your ink.

Grin.. am happy at your presence so no worries there..
ty fer always taking time on me misters, means much & you are amazing for ;)
You got another soggy makeup'ed thx fer the *masterful, them's humblin' words.
dazzlin nites to you poet,
~d

intense!!!! yes this is erotica and then some..too bad we can only pick one category!!..the imagery took me for a wild ride...then came the uppercut to the gut         {Suck pulling back.. pout rubs swelled tip,     'whisper .."I love you".. (on fierce dip)     you stiff pause then.. as do my licks,     passion alone won't quench my slick..     'Need respect above all of this..   of love.. mayhap you never did.}           wow!!!..   I just love erotica with a deep sense of emotional and/or mental aspect to them   it's not just about the sex but the 'situation' that surrounds the act..   I'm really feelin this D   yes ma'am

Oh, my dear friend.. am so glad you enjoyed.. your intense comment gives this pen of mine more purpose w/such feedback ;)
heartfelt thanx misters, fer seein the emotion laid out (bare) here..
always shine & wishes to you,
everly ~d

Har-hars m'darlin' Taryn of the Sweets.. no better love~stuff have I ever received!
and still thankin' you for the poetic *pop.. in devious smirks.
this dream surely spun me & I'm glad I got it all down without missing a beat/thrust/lick!
maulin' you wif luvz, my sissy ;)
mwahs
~d

black liquid sorrow falls from your eyes, & there drips the loneliness & loss. such a bitter yet beautiful cup you drink from...

You are ever on the poetic mark, SirJ..and w/pure liquid words. ty.
much appreciate the visit m'dear  ;)
curtsies low & fondly,
~d

" The Mascara Snake is fast & bulbous"  Captain Beefheart (Don Van Vliet) from: Trout Mask Replica, 1969

and Frank Zappa lives on.. on dup no less! lol..awesome you fer reminding me of the album..
also enjoyed the 3rd in series, "Lick My Decals Off, Baby (1970)!!
great day to you, sweet sirz o D~saxx!
~d

This poetry is very skillful. What a great mood and atmosphere you set and then change in an instant leaving us wanting and almost wanting to cry with you. Great write.

Aww.. much thanx to 'The Circle' I am so fond of after just one read!
I am honored, as poet.. to groove hot & cry hard w/ my fellows ;)
best of days to you's..
fondly, you've made my today w/comment!
~d

D-
Oh my!!!!! Your imagery and creative craft set
free here. My senses went haywire as I read this complex masterpiece.. You are simply nothing short of amazing and just so you know, I can tell you that youve become my muse hands down😚

The sweetest words EVER... you have a humble friend & fan for life!
I am so touched with smile and hope you have a very blessed day, m'lady ;)
curtsies & well~wishes,
~d

i've probably gotta consult dr. freud about sudden onset penis envy o.O
*gigglesnorts*
"Your silk wrapped fist, tugging each thrust
in blind pleasured mascara~runs."
^^^^^
money shot lines!!!!!! & not a delicious drop wasted ;)
loveeeeeeeeed this, darlin sighs
me thinks i have said lips full of beg now
xoxox

Aww sissy.. no envy allowed, you mastercrafter of smutties..twas a good/bad dream that woke me just as needy.. *believe that.. ;)
will spread wishes that all our future mascara runs shall be only in fuckerly hot fashion..
hugs n luvstuffs to my favorite K ever!
mwah
~d

weaver of erotic magic.. I'm in awe of your seductive prowess.. a mighty creamy pen you wield.. I'm with Katja wishing I was endowed with a bulging member to make your dream come true.. creamy and so masterfully crafted.. with love Crim

You are adorable, lil ladyCrim & give hothot comment.. 'creamy pen' cud spark a poem all its own I think..
at moment I'm makin due by dream, with soo much appreciation to have you take time on me..
ty sweetly for the smile darlins ;) well wishes,
~d

A deep rhythmic flow carries these words down a slope of tears that make dreams taste like nightmares. I know the sadness of this realm and share your hearts despair... jj

"A deep rhythmic flow carries these words down a slope of tears that make dreams taste like nightmares."
~This?..!! ..luv this gem of a line, JJ! you always have the knack for leavin' me stunning comment, ty ;)
yep, dark does* sigh on the damn longing & despair.. lil grrz. hughug.
be well...'appreciate the read misters!
~d/T

How in the world did I miss this? I thought I had it so I would get an update from you when you posted. Yep. I checked and I am following you. Whot happened? Oh well, I am here now.  You gotta know I liked this poem. This just sticks out among a multitude of fantastic lines, "Your silk wrapped fist, tugging each thrust," but in my opinion this line is the first shot across the bow. Yes, was about as perfect as a poem could be. No misinterpreting it for sure, but then some people are pros at turning things around. Oh hell yes, this is a "like" poem.

You are so gawdsbedamned sweet misters! Much thanx fer being so awesome, m'friend.
The Drama~less We, indeed. ..I am a'smirk..& appreciate your time!
 best day to you ;)
~d

I would wipe your mascara tears after that.

Awwes & hugs fer reading my mushy, lusty ..yet messy dream poetry....
I'm everywhere these days, emotions in strong breeze, I s(w)ay..  <~..lol (poem? -jk)
much adores-ment for takin' time on me, sweet sir!
~d

This is so wonderful.  I am in awe. Ive had tears streaming down my face, him in my throat, used the words, toes curled, purr, clawed in my pieces. I hope to write this expressively someday. 💋

Kiss-kiss to those kinda tears m'dear.. I am so humbled to have you on my page! means so much & I wish we did not need get *there, before finding the truth.. life just IS tho, yes?..sad grrz.. ;)
ty for relating..and for ur time.. best day to you!
~

You deeply honor me, favored poetess.. warm thanx & hughug..for your ever-wise words.
"The ache of unfettered yet unacknowledged, unrequited love and passion"
~such perfect summation, m'lady!
Sweet sniffles to your comment in entirety.. ty..best of days to you ;)
~d