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Wings Dipped In Ink
She comes to me in the night
this celestial being
wings dipped in Aphrodite's ink
seduces me with her gorgeous
wickedly salacious ways
weaving magic with words
they ensconce me
bedecks my broken body with stars
she has plucked from the heavens
beguiles my dreams
beautiful one who watches from afar
though is always felt
beautiful vixen whom I love
I feel serenity and excitement
when you are near
a private friend to me
we keep close to our chests what is vested
not to be compromised avoiding prying eyes
she confounds and bewitches me
with the gentle stroke of her pen
seeing her more clearly with each write
my illusive lady love
who will never be mine to claim
she dances in my periphery a Goddess in my mind's eye
For blue_angel entered in DU user Comp.
this celestial being
wings dipped in Aphrodite's ink
seduces me with her gorgeous
wickedly salacious ways
weaving magic with words
they ensconce me
bedecks my broken body with stars
she has plucked from the heavens
beguiles my dreams
beautiful one who watches from afar
though is always felt
beautiful vixen whom I love
I feel serenity and excitement
when you are near
a private friend to me
we keep close to our chests what is vested
not to be compromised avoiding prying eyes
she confounds and bewitches me
with the gentle stroke of her pen
seeing her more clearly with each write
my illusive lady love
who will never be mine to claim
she dances in my periphery a Goddess in my mind's eye
For blue_angel entered in DU user Comp.
Published 24th Jul 2015
| Edited 25th Jul 2015
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24th Jul 2015 5:30pm
Beautifully written Crim. She sounds like the perfect muse with the power to bewitch and bewilder. "She dances in my periphery." Sounds like a bit of a tease, but what do I know. She's an inspiration, a Goddess, and maybe a lot of fun as well.
24th Jul 2015 6:35pm
thank you Sir Crow for an insightful comment she is a friend and true inspiration with her beauty and ink with love Crim
31st Aug 2015 10:01pm
(Dark desires come in the form of Crimsin fire). I bow in honor to this ink , Dearest Crim. An oversight I shan't ever forgive myself for. The beauty you harness here is unfathomable, and leaves me breathlessly in awe. I'm seriously moved by this poem. Now, I have to punish you for not bringing this to my attention sooner, A punishment of pleasure, I fear. In utter appreciation, and love.. yours deeply, blue angel
1st Sep 2015 3:05pm
thank you lovely Angel for showing me and this write your love :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
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24th Jul 2015 6:37pm
Sweet Crim......what a mystical write.....great tribute.....very enchanting......I felt my spirit soar within your words......luv this....RL for me.....enjoyed this very much.....bowing with respect......xo :)
25th Jul 2015 4:12pm
beautiful Flower thank so much.. you moved me deeply with your comment and RL add with love Crim
25th Jul 2015 5:01am
this is a glorious poem for the beautiful angel of all our blueness, Crim. she is passionately vested...
25th Jul 2015 4:13pm
thank you John she is like you so very gifted a writer and lovely person with love Crim
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27th Jul 2015 10:39am
I wish she would come visit me :-)
beautifully written, good luck with the comp :-)
beautifully written, good luck with the comp :-)
27th Jul 2015 3:18pm
thank you David for the beautiful comment and making me smile :) with love Crim
9th Aug 2015 2:36pm
The ultimate muse a beautiful vixen...you wait for each night. The flow is seductive.
10th Aug 2015 2:52am
11th Aug 2015 11:04pm
Very beautiful, seems like a lady that would probably entrance me as well!
The only criticism I might have is that the title may seem more succinct and have a bit more punch if it were "Ink Dipped Wings" or "Ink-Dipped Wings" the word "in" just feels unnecessary.
But overall lovely piece.
The only criticism I might have is that the title may seem more succinct and have a bit more punch if it were "Ink Dipped Wings" or "Ink-Dipped Wings" the word "in" just feels unnecessary.
But overall lovely piece.
12th Aug 2015 7:08pm
thank you lovely one I had trouble with the title too..
thank you also for such a beautiful comment..
with love Crim
thank you also for such a beautiful comment..
with love Crim
