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CRY...
Another day, another sunrise
another moment, I sit n' cry
n' I don't why, because a love
I thought I knew, was nothing
but a lie...
At once it grew, this interest
into a wonder, she cast a mighty
spell n' before I knew my heart
fell all asunder...
Another night, another dusk til
dawn, I die awake, cryin' lakes
into the pillows I lay upon...
The years they've pasted
like light beams across the sky
still, I can't forget the love-shots
I'd take like dope, was truly nothin'
but a lie...
Another morn' I yet mourn
chasin' shadows in the mist
I'll worry on 'bout a false love
worn, likely wear it til I die
what a fool this shattered
heart is, every hopin'
'that distanced love'
will one day, still my cry...
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Re. CRY...
16th Jul 2015 4:21pm
"I die awake, cryin' lakes <~~ power o cry.. you did this so smooth misters!
into the pillows I lay upon... " "die awake" ..being most awesome.
"the love-shots" ..great lil phrase!
We all know bout the fast burning ones darlins..
you've dun well w/this & yeps.. you get hugs.
emotion-packed & singe-ing cry you've penned.
now.. smile.. for 1st nites are *the worst ..
take care hun
~d
into the pillows I lay upon... " "die awake" ..being most awesome.
"the love-shots" ..great lil phrase!
We all know bout the fast burning ones darlins..
you've dun well w/this & yeps.. you get hugs.
emotion-packed & singe-ing cry you've penned.
now.. smile.. for 1st nites are *the worst ..
take care hun
~d
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16th Jul 2015 7:50pm
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16th Jul 2015 4:48pm
Poe I ache for your hurt heart and the tears you shed.. powerful write sending hugs your way with love Crim
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16th Jul 2015 7:51pm
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16th Jul 2015 5:53pm
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16th Jul 2015 7:53pm
Nope it's NOT fiction, still thanks for ur thoughts n concern
Appreciate it much my dear :)
Appreciate it much my dear :)
Re. CRY...
17th Jul 2015 6:31pm
I hear You very well
on this one Poet.
Gotta talk about it
though; right?
Felt... Pan
on this one Poet.
Gotta talk about it
though; right?
Felt... Pan
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17th Jul 2015 6:36pm
Thanks bro. Yea, ur right... It eats at one anyways but releasing some of it makes a lil more bearable than holdin it in... Appreciate you much :)
Re. CRY...
I do not know a lot about poems but this to me is very raw and real. I'm going through this right now and it is constantly playing on my mind 24-7. So this sort of comforts me but disturbs me at the same time. So many are living the same nightmare.
Powerfully emotive.
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20th Jul 2015 11:53pm
Aaaawwww sweetie I'm so sorry to hear u feel/felt this way...I truly wouldn't wish this torment on my worst enemy... But thank u for ur time n thoughts on my ink :)
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24th Jul 2015 6:27pm
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24th Jul 2015 6:43pm
Thanks, too bad for me it's still haunting me... I appreciate ur thoughts though :)
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19th Aug 2015 2:14am
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19th Aug 2015 2:53am
Thank you...truly appreciate your time n thoughts on my ink n yea, it was painful, n actually never quite goes away...