we [sometimes]

i've been trying to think of an eloquent comment but i'm afraid you'll have to be subjected to my disconnected rambling [sorry]
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there's something really cleansing about this tbh. purging isn't pretty, neither is living & i love that you haven't gone adding bells & whistles to this to make it palatable...
... an ugly truth, an uncomfortable one too, but so damn well written i can't get enough of it; the repition just pounds away ugh ya know what i'm trying to say, yes? it's fecking steller work, Al
xo

Hello My Friend

Thank you for the stellar comment.

I'm pleased the repetition works, it was the point of the piece at the outset.

It's a very new form for me, it had the danger of being urrrghhh!

Thanks again

-x-

sums it up in a big way, raw and basic but with an intrinsic beauty. Great structure too.
thanks

Hey Hey..
Hello Miss Moondancer

Great to have you around me pages again...
thanks for the visit and
the awesome commentary

Love Al -x-

I have no idea how I became unsubscribed to you-I figured you weren't writing and I'm so glad I read your (awesome) work in a comp and I went to go check it out.
love and light, my friend