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Inflamed Waters
Slip down with me, neath turquoise seas,
opaque sands tickle our feet.
Skinny black strings grace hip, slung low
your finger tugs there first..slow slow.
Hooking, you pull.. our skin meets close,
laying me back to free-float..
Legs rise, sans weight in your arms
head dips to nip my pearled soak.
Suckles you lay, arching me.. warm
piercing deep, my pulsing core..
Waters in splash, your tongue-hot lash,
burning sips of complexing swirl.
Shores shift 'tween us, upping my blush;
I taunt you in emerald lust.
Spill hot rush to your hand, sexy man,
whisper, .. "I flame for your fuck."
'Neath waters of deep you enter
claiming my tightest desire..
I scream, I plead.. for 'harder please!"..
you Own me, give all that I need.
Strokes surge wide. waves push at us both
our rhythm creams you as I slide.
You are hard in-and-out.. smooth glide
pale hips cradle, wiggle and grind.
From our shared look, I bliss-shatter
squeezing pre-love from your thrust..
Encircled, you claim all perfection
as we peak in unison'ed hush.
opaque sands tickle our feet.
Skinny black strings grace hip, slung low
your finger tugs there first..slow slow.
Hooking, you pull.. our skin meets close,
laying me back to free-float..
Legs rise, sans weight in your arms
head dips to nip my pearled soak.
Suckles you lay, arching me.. warm
piercing deep, my pulsing core..
Waters in splash, your tongue-hot lash,
burning sips of complexing swirl.
Shores shift 'tween us, upping my blush;
I taunt you in emerald lust.
Spill hot rush to your hand, sexy man,
whisper, .. "I flame for your fuck."
'Neath waters of deep you enter
claiming my tightest desire..
I scream, I plead.. for 'harder please!"..
you Own me, give all that I need.
Strokes surge wide. waves push at us both
our rhythm creams you as I slide.
You are hard in-and-out.. smooth glide
pale hips cradle, wiggle and grind.
From our shared look, I bliss-shatter
squeezing pre-love from your thrust..
Encircled, you claim all perfection
as we peak in unison'ed hush.
Published 7th Jul 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
7th Jul 2015 1:18am
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7th Jul 2015 7:49am
omgddss!..you darked.. moi, seester?! ..
*smirkin big, with hugs.
and so we tingle on, sweet Taryn..ever eye to eye
on the feelin's. (no pouts, gd-it..I try)
luvzu lady of m'heart! *mwahs
~d
*smirkin big, with hugs.
and so we tingle on, sweet Taryn..ever eye to eye
on the feelin's. (no pouts, gd-it..I try)
luvzu lady of m'heart! *mwahs
~d
7th Jul 2015 1:44am
7th Jul 2015 7:51am
7th Jul 2015 2:20am
7th Jul 2015 7:55am
7th Jul 2015 4:46am
and there you sit with purdee waters.. *I'm
more than a wee bit jealous! ;)
sweet thanx fer the smiles uve left, sirz o D-saxx.
huggs always
~d
more than a wee bit jealous! ;)
sweet thanx fer the smiles uve left, sirz o D-saxx.
huggs always
~d
8th Jul 2015 4:33am
I wouldn't trade it fo'nuthin nohow, but
them ever beautied waters
has a sadness to it when ye been there over a 1000 times alone, wit often too many 'couples' almost always to remind
ye that it sure seems like
your coupled-life has been
over
a long time now...& yr 'optimism' as to reviving
'it' here has diminished over 3+ yrs in Paradise.
phew, I just accidently deleted 1/2 of this "eXsplay'nation", thank g'odd
just shut the machine off mr.numbnuts
8th Jul 2015 7:07am
appreciates sweet helz of your use of 'numbnutz'..
a personal fav, misters!
we must protect its virility at all cost!
furious fits o'grin fer ur company, ty
pagan-y blessins n'aww ;)
~d
a personal fav, misters!
we must protect its virility at all cost!
furious fits o'grin fer ur company, ty
pagan-y blessins n'aww ;)
~d
7th Jul 2015 4:52am
Wow. I was thirsty, then you gave me water. Love this write, very much! Supreme erotica ;)
7th Jul 2015 8:01am
Thanx sweetly fer the read, m'dear poetess!
sooo touching to have you here, every time ;)
magicks to your nite!
~d
sooo touching to have you here, every time ;)
magicks to your nite!
~d
7th Jul 2015 8:10am
Wow, such a erotic and sensuous piece you have here
it was like diving in a pool of love making, sexy.
Loved it
it was like diving in a pool of love making, sexy.
Loved it
7th Jul 2015 10:04am
definitely of my hawt loves..
sweet thx on the read m'lady, appreciate it greatly..
gdntes & mornin' to you!
~d!
sweet thx on the read m'lady, appreciate it greatly..
gdntes & mornin' to you!
~d!
8th Jul 2015 8:21am
so it really is all about the motion of the ocean, huh [?]
*smirks*
size queen moi stands corrected...
"Strokes surge wide. waves push at us both
our rhythm creams you as I slide."
^^^^^^
ooh day'um day'um smh hawtness hawtmess
xo
*smirks*
size queen moi stands corrected...
"Strokes surge wide. waves push at us both
our rhythm creams you as I slide."
^^^^^^
ooh day'um day'um smh hawtness hawtmess
xo
9th Jul 2015 6:38am
harfs to your 'huh' ladyluv! too funny.. yes,..er..
uh-nda the ocean(sunk deep). teeheez
Smilin dark & adoring on you m'sis.. was missin my muse everbad neath this sea..
luvzu
~d
uh-nda the ocean(sunk deep). teeheez
Smilin dark & adoring on you m'sis.. was missin my muse everbad neath this sea..
luvzu
~d
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
8th Jul 2015 5:04pm
<< post removed >>
9th Jul 2015 6:42am
aah.. sweet voyeurism, where wud we be w/out
it, yes? (ooh yess)
My humble thanx.. I am ever glad to see you
here fer comment m'dear lady, tyty!
beautiful nites to you sweetie ;)
~d
it, yes? (ooh yess)
My humble thanx.. I am ever glad to see you
here fer comment m'dear lady, tyty!
beautiful nites to you sweetie ;)
~d
9th Jul 2015 6:51am
You are my dreamfuk all-ways(ALL).. my love!
we will never accomplish much separately, when
ever attached at the.. hip(?)(!!)
Certainly blessed to see my inspire gracing my
daydreams..~~> that be *you darlins..
love on you, my Michael! *kisses & ty fer bein here
~T
we will never accomplish much separately, when
ever attached at the.. hip(?)(!!)
Certainly blessed to see my inspire gracing my
daydreams..~~> that be *you darlins..
love on you, my Michael! *kisses & ty fer bein here
~T
9th Jul 2015 6:44am
9th Jul 2015 4:10pm
So very lovely to have you here, m'dear!
I'm so sure that.. un'secluded, works, even.. no? (yes) grin*
best hours to you, SirJ.. it means much to see you
signing my lines ;)
be well/raise hell, misters!
~d
I'm so sure that.. un'secluded, works, even.. no? (yes) grin*
best hours to you, SirJ.. it means much to see you
signing my lines ;)
be well/raise hell, misters!
~d
Anonymous
9th Jul 2015 4:25pm
"Neath waters of deep you enter
claiming my tightest desire.. "
Unlike MS.audioharlee
I am a total exhibitionist, and this might as well be done on a crowded beach for all to see for the real scene takes place beneath and no one could detect. Unless of course cries of passion were to accompany. Oh well that is my fantasy within your fantasy, I love it!
claiming my tightest desire.. "
Unlike MS.audioharlee
I am a total exhibitionist, and this might as well be done on a crowded beach for all to see for the real scene takes place beneath and no one could detect. Unless of course cries of passion were to accompany. Oh well that is my fantasy within your fantasy, I love it!
9th Jul 2015 4:55pm
gracious grins.. we are of same mind there,
mista slowO, not a thing sweeter than m'darlin
havin no qualm on the public throw-down of luvins..
when you're right?.. I just smile ;)
tyty fer stoppin in, m'dear!
~d
mista slowO, not a thing sweeter than m'darlin
havin no qualm on the public throw-down of luvins..
when you're right?.. I just smile ;)
tyty fer stoppin in, m'dear!
~d
Ahhh....luvin the verbiage...like a musician striking the perfect tone..the peaks and valleys of this vibe just ignite the senses like wooo....and that last stanza bought it home ever so lovely.
"From our shared look, I bliss-shatter
squeezing pre-love from your thrust..
Encircled, you claim all perfection
as we peak in unison'ed hush"
....ahh yes..poetically piqued indeed..magnificent manifestation of erotica this is D...
"From our shared look, I bliss-shatter
squeezing pre-love from your thrust..
Encircled, you claim all perfection
as we peak in unison'ed hush"
....ahh yes..poetically piqued indeed..magnificent manifestation of erotica this is D...
10th Jul 2015 4:53am
Aww.. you give blushing comments to be sure!
As with all, love tends to inspire the scribbles, sweet sir, & you are thank-d much!
humbled, I am.. to see you here,
A'mazin' hours to you ;)
~d
As with all, love tends to inspire the scribbles, sweet sir, & you are thank-d much!
humbled, I am.. to see you here,
A'mazin' hours to you ;)
~d
31st Jul 2015 3:32am
like a chef you cook up a brillant dish for eyes to feast... and this ink is absolutely delicious beginning to end... im hungry for seconds hehe :D
