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Stitched Tune
By ever-unholy of mid'nights,
hot sands are nearing plight.
Time be a bitter toll for all
rushing to ward last flight.
Pity rings my well 'round aplenty
on crisp of Hades' bell.
I shine and sing hushed ditty
to no one that could tell.
Flouncing in petal strewn circle
of vinous standing stones,
I woe a stitched tune gone aching
to grave holes and their home.
I hymn of raw darkened somber
that eats away my strength.
I lull past-living to hear me
in light of form's fresh links.
Serrated wounds spill out as daggers
I freshly grind frame aches.
Whittle bright tunes toward sunrise
embracing life's final stake.
Crisp stains cover a shining soul
grasping for 'body' peace,
within silent rose-casted yards
where yet, only death shall weep.
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Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 5:09am
re: Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 3:18pm
Mornin's of thanks lovely lady!
I'ma call it my 6/8 woe..ha's..
have great hours poetess of shiny wit ;)
~d
I'ma call it my 6/8 woe..ha's..
have great hours poetess of shiny wit ;)
~d
Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 5:13am
"Where yet, only death shall weep."
Amazing line, another perfect poem, that goes along the flow of a shining river.
Beautifully dark poem, I enjoyed it very much.
May your night be filled with joy, and other pleasant things!
Amazing line, another perfect poem, that goes along the flow of a shining river.
Beautifully dark poem, I enjoyed it very much.
May your night be filled with joy, and other pleasant things!
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re: Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 3:21pm
You are so sweet this morn..
ur *awesome comments go vera well w/m'coffees..
be welz, poet dear! (ty)
~d
ur *awesome comments go vera well w/m'coffees..
be welz, poet dear! (ty)
~d
Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 5:14am
re: Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 3:23pm
Grins of mornin's to you sweet poetess!
ever-amazin' you are fer the visit ;)
warm hugs hun,
~d
ever-amazin' you are fer the visit ;)
warm hugs hun,
~d
Re: Stitched Tune
re: Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 3:26pm
I loves you too babies..
and low grrz much to the sleepins.
(a *duk anda *squeak riiiite.. there)
*kisses of mornin's darlin!
luv knowing you *just know..y'knw?
~T
and low grrz much to the sleepins.
(a *duk anda *squeak riiiite.. there)
*kisses of mornin's darlin!
luv knowing you *just know..y'knw?
~T
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30th Jun 2015 5:57pm
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30th Jun 2015 7:10pm
Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 12:47pm
"I hymn of raw darkened somber
that eats away my strength.
I lull past-living to hear me
in light of form's fresh links."
^^^^^
gawds. it's like you're in my bones there ...
... your mourn is beautiful darling sighs
sending hugs xo
that eats away my strength.
I lull past-living to hear me
in light of form's fresh links."
^^^^^
gawds. it's like you're in my bones there ...
... your mourn is beautiful darling sighs
sending hugs xo
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re: Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 3:33pm
Oh-oh! The kittyK is out to play!! yays..
luvely 'ack of morning to you luv(fondly),
I know you know bout 'dis stuffs & always have those shiny dark hugs fer you when hrs be so long..
biggest squishes *everz
~seester d~
(*kinda like how *purely(driven)snow this sounds..ha's
luvely 'ack of morning to you luv(fondly),
I know you know bout 'dis stuffs & always have those shiny dark hugs fer you when hrs be so long..
biggest squishes *everz
~seester d~
(*kinda like how *purely(driven)snow this sounds..ha's
re: Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 3:36pm
Thank you, ever kindly fer visiting
misterz,as your read is much appreciated!
mornin' curtsies,
~d
misterz,as your read is much appreciated!
mornin' curtsies,
~d
Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 4:15pm
re: Re: Stitched Tune
30th Jun 2015 4:42pm
Thankies, my dearest one..
dark flounce tends to plague at nite.. attacks my fav times wif grrz.
wonder still if it's dun a'purpose?! blasfeen-like!
either way..I just luvluv havin' you here & hope
you get good hrs today, my Sirz o Dsaxx, I soo
brighten to.. ;)
~d
dark flounce tends to plague at nite.. attacks my fav times wif grrz.
wonder still if it's dun a'purpose?! blasfeen-like!
either way..I just luvluv havin' you here & hope
you get good hrs today, my Sirz o Dsaxx, I soo
brighten to.. ;)
~d
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re: Re: Stitched Tune
1st Jul 2015 8:39am
Aww no hauntins sweetest sis, wantcha to frolic the
gravestones wif me.. *kisskiss
have been told to 'trouble the trouble' sort o mess..lol. (eeks, be I mistaken)
yepps on sharing that flame.. we alwys will, my purdy!
you are a strong shiny soul Taryn..ever glad to
count you on my web fer talkins. ;)
~d
gravestones wif me.. *kisskiss
have been told to 'trouble the trouble' sort o mess..lol. (eeks, be I mistaken)
yepps on sharing that flame.. we alwys will, my purdy!
you are a strong shiny soul Taryn..ever glad to
count you on my web fer talkins. ;)
~d