deepundergroundpoetry.com
You've Already Gone
I bleed to bend my will your way
as I kneel.. you turn your face..
Empty echoes of sworn peace
your hand just cannot release..
dog on a bone you start to chew
my guts scalding, fast pour food.
Enjoyment in your eyes a'glazed
hope is restless, soul displaced.
Asked you to "see me" un'cowled..
..never the same, I once was proud.
Even as I weep upon love lost,
heart knows well the steepest cost.
Fiery Fates have made one vow..
..to withhold forever's 'here and now'.
Torn flesh brings motivation thrill,
spooled heart meat.. so freshly spilled..
..ribbon'ing vitals steaming warm,
hit mouth jagged, minus skin-form.
Innocence doubtful in starved appetite..
..gruel, sweet meat, pink puddled sight.
Sated on lips that in love I once kissed,
abomination now of that sweet bliss.
Darkness sounds last laugh of them all..
Destiny's creature catches my fall.
arms open wide.."I should care more.."
yet I'm quick for flames, eyes to the floor..
..empty shell, disposed harshly upon..
won't save my life.. you've already gone.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 1
comments 19
reads 969
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 3:57am
re: Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 8:42am
I am soo glad fer gal-palz like you!
..& feel blessed to have u *peg my emotions
so well here.. *mwahs fer that!
take care & thx fer readin, alwyz ;)
~dark-darksighs
..& feel blessed to have u *peg my emotions
so well here.. *mwahs fer that!
take care & thx fer readin, alwyz ;)
~dark-darksighs
Re: You've Already Gone
love it
an empty shell, disposed harshly upon won't save my life, you've already gone.....i know quite well what this feels like...
great ink keep it up
Mastersgdgurl
an empty shell, disposed harshly upon won't save my life, you've already gone.....i know quite well what this feels like...
great ink keep it up
Mastersgdgurl
1

re: Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 8:48am
I always know you're gonna get it m'sweetie!
One day I won't have to write love poetry anymore..
may it up-spin my heart & gimme shell 'gainst pain soon, ya'know?! *sighs
huggs u, thx fer readin me today..
be good or bad/good ;)
~d
One day I won't have to write love poetry anymore..
may it up-spin my heart & gimme shell 'gainst pain soon, ya'know?! *sighs
huggs u, thx fer readin me today..
be good or bad/good ;)
~d
You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 8:24am
Darksighs, luv ~ :-
This fair wrenches the heart right out. You've done an excellent job evoking this. Mercy, luv, I hurt after reading this. You've channeled it too perfectly. The ache is deep and torturous. Your pen is far too masterful, luv -- savant artiste, I name you... :-*
This fair wrenches the heart right out. You've done an excellent job evoking this. Mercy, luv, I hurt after reading this. You've channeled it too perfectly. The ache is deep and torturous. Your pen is far too masterful, luv -- savant artiste, I name you... :-*
1

re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 3:44pm
Aww sweet luv! You- I grant mercy, always *to you*
(N *few others..I am too raw fer much mercies when Mercy careth not fer me) grzzz
And adores the "savant artiste"..pls tell me I will be *all-knowing in love frm now on? (pls-pls)
my humblest hugs, to hv u here m'doll ;)
~d
(N *few others..I am too raw fer much mercies when Mercy careth not fer me) grzzz
And adores the "savant artiste"..pls tell me I will be *all-knowing in love frm now on? (pls-pls)
my humblest hugs, to hv u here m'doll ;)
~d
re: re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 10:29pm
Ahhh, luv ~
Would that I could tell you that in truth - alas! I will not lie to you. I have never known that state to be attainable for if 'twere, believe that many would be omni-love-scient. ;-p
Hugs, yes, let's do. It's I who am humble, luv, for you beggar me with the wealth and richness of your dark and lush language. Here I am prostrate at your feet... ;-*
Would that I could tell you that in truth - alas! I will not lie to you. I have never known that state to be attainable for if 'twere, believe that many would be omni-love-scient. ;-p
Hugs, yes, let's do. It's I who am humble, luv, for you beggar me with the wealth and richness of your dark and lush language. Here I am prostrate at your feet... ;-*
1

Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 8:33am
re: Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 3:47pm
Very-much so, SirJ..and u knw what they say..
"Fool me once, shame on you..fool me *twice..
shame on me..
twice-zappd feels hellish & unkind.
be welz dear poet, artist & more ;)
mwahs
~d
"Fool me once, shame on you..fool me *twice..
shame on me..
twice-zappd feels hellish & unkind.
be welz dear poet, artist & more ;)
mwahs
~d
Re: You've Already Gone
Anonymous
19th Jun 2015 10:35am
i've mourned the living before...
... you cut to the marrow with this piece xo
... you cut to the marrow with this piece xo

1

re: Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 3:50pm
sweet fuks! mourn wif me then, won't you?
crumbled shell of me is jus' beggin fer sum
last-rites..
luv helz out of uz babe!
~d
crumbled shell of me is jus' beggin fer sum
last-rites..
luv helz out of uz babe!
~d
Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 2:44pm
"Sated on lips, that in love I once kissed
abomination now of that sweet bliss. "
Yup, I've felt this very deep heartbreaking pain...
STILL not the same since, but forced to try n carry on...
Deeply moving ink.
abomination now of that sweet bliss. "
Yup, I've felt this very deep heartbreaking pain...
STILL not the same since, but forced to try n carry on...
Deeply moving ink.
1

re: Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 3:57pm
Sor-ree..forgives the reminder dears?
..in a foul cunty mood..owies ain't posta
happen like this 'n proly hv not since I was
umm.. 19. Yep. 2x, one lifetime..'tis enuf to hermit a soul m'thinks.
sweet thx in seein u here, those two lines
u picked r a big break of owie in this 'un. ;)
be welz alwys misterz
~d
..in a foul cunty mood..owies ain't posta
happen like this 'n proly hv not since I was
umm.. 19. Yep. 2x, one lifetime..'tis enuf to hermit a soul m'thinks.
sweet thx in seein u here, those two lines
u picked r a big break of owie in this 'un. ;)
be welz alwys misterz
~d
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
19th Jun 2015 4:49pm
<< post removed >>

re: Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 5:31pm
Ooohh..we mixin' em now, my sweet Taryn?
Pour-oooonn! tys gf!
'N kisses to ur scab, my arse gets too
good at that (self telz me)
Good fer u to heal it away, wish my stubborn
heart wud take the hit n move space but
not there (grzz)
sweet luvz on u always m'soul-sissy
~d
Pour-oooonn! tys gf!
'N kisses to ur scab, my arse gets too
good at that (self telz me)
Good fer u to heal it away, wish my stubborn
heart wud take the hit n move space but
not there (grzz)
sweet luvz on u always m'soul-sissy
~d
Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 5:51pm
I loved this piece soynds luke a relationship of abuse.maybe im reading it wrong i dont know i can just picture my ex when im reading but this is by far a brilliant piece amazing work
1

re: Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 6:30pm
I adore ur visit muches m'dear!
Heard similar thots on this one. oops to me.
Can honestly say this is *only (bigg only)
my rendition of bein left so empty I
cud just float n die on heartache. I am glad u saw
anything past my rambling, ty ;)
Thanx so much fer readin luvz!
~d
Heard similar thots on this one. oops to me.
Can honestly say this is *only (bigg only)
my rendition of bein left so empty I
cud just float n die on heartache. I am glad u saw
anything past my rambling, ty ;)
Thanx so much fer readin luvz!
~d
Re: You've Already Gone
19th Jun 2015 9:24pm
Re: You've Already Gone
20th Jun 2015 6:25pm
I think u and are in sync Dark..
I too was thinking and wrote about my x husband last night,
I do so get this pain sweet one.
Glad you're putting it into ink and letting it out!
I hope you're feeling a little better after releasing this beautiful but sad piece..
love always Dark...
(((((((((Tanya)))))))))))
Jackie xoxoxo
I too was thinking and wrote about my x husband last night,
I do so get this pain sweet one.
Glad you're putting it into ink and letting it out!
I hope you're feeling a little better after releasing this beautiful but sad piece..
love always Dark...
(((((((((Tanya)))))))))))
Jackie xoxoxo
1
