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A Good Hard Brick
Dirty-stick prods
ruthless to core.
Pending soul bile
crust cravenly sore.
Ne'er a whimper
neither a blink,
umbrageous impact
heart in slow sink.
A good hard brick
opens my mouth,
eyes squeezed tight
for solid kick down.
Regret leaks, hot
drips past the cheek..
of a girl, jaded
too proud to weep.
Arms open wide
bowed to m'knee,
esoteric silences
into this night, bleed.
Aweary tears plea
peace to commence.
Brick dust lies sour
tongue raw in defense.
Distrust be devil-
yet crowned fury seethes.
I'm no shrinkin' violet
but his sceptre'ed appease.
Saw mine own beauty
in deeply welled eyes.
Cindered castle a'fade
by damnation applied.
Soul-shatters in cry-
Halt Everlove's death!?
My hushed mortar weeps
Brick bouquet..sans breath.
Published 18th Jun 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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18th Jun 2015 11:21pm
Arms open wide
bowed to m'knee,
esoteric silences
into this night, bleed.
Not a woman one hasn't been there. Nor man.
bowed to m'knee,
esoteric silences
into this night, bleed.
Not a woman one hasn't been there. Nor man.
19th Jun 2015 7:27am
Aww, bigg *luvz fer reading me m'dearest gal!
So good to see you & ur timing is grand..
*need smiles badly..my nite & m'heart? both f-ed ;(
ty much fer stoppin'!
hv a fancy-ole nite hun
~d
So good to see you & ur timing is grand..
*need smiles badly..my nite & m'heart? both f-ed ;(
ty much fer stoppin'!
hv a fancy-ole nite hun
~d
19th Jun 2015 1:10pm
The ink is dark, sad...but the expressive approach is flawless n outstandingly impressive!
19th Jun 2015 4:05pm
Just clearin' air on my fruitless forever
feelings..u 'member when *forevers truly
meant all? I still do..
(aka- old enuf, I shud g-d knw better)
*meaning it gets one-sided tricky..
still thx fer reading my depressed n shattered
page m'dears. 'preciate it bigg-timz!
~d
feelings..u 'member when *forevers truly
meant all? I still do..
(aka- old enuf, I shud g-d knw better)
*meaning it gets one-sided tricky..
still thx fer reading my depressed n shattered
page m'dears. 'preciate it bigg-timz!
~d
19th Jun 2015 5:46pm
This is a great piece i havent read anything from you i havent liked amazing ink
21st Jun 2015 1:29pm
You m'dear, bring warm smiles, right back at'ya
lady!
great-alwyz to have u here!
be ever welz ;)
~d
lady!
great-alwyz to have u here!
be ever welz ;)
~d
20th Jun 2015 4:27am
How your poetry evokes!!!!...the title alone calls attention..and the words that follow....wow..one could only imagine the source of inspiration for this piece..your words definitely have a unique gravitational effect...magnificent writing indeed..
21st Jun 2015 1:33pm
Inspired on m'own never ending broken m'thinks..
Sweet you, fer stoppin' in fer a slam of sigh
wif me..
thankies dear, luv havin u here w/ great feedbacks!
mwahs
~d
Sweet you, fer stoppin' in fer a slam of sigh
wif me..
thankies dear, luv havin u here w/ great feedbacks!
mwahs
~d
Anonymous
20th Jun 2015 6:16pm
i'm going to be totally weird now [more weird than usual i mean] & say this oddly reminds of m/c [must stop smoking so much electric spinach] ...
"I'm no shrinkin' violet
but his sceptre'ed appease."
^^^^
... broke my little black heart with this one, darling sighs
hugs to you
xoxo
"I'm no shrinkin' violet
but his sceptre'ed appease."
^^^^
... broke my little black heart with this one, darling sighs
hugs to you
xoxo
21st Jun 2015 1:44pm
I fleckin' **luv ur shiny black heart to pieces!
lmsao @ ur electric spinach (yumz much).. one day, we shall raze helz lady ;)
spankin' mwahs on u doll, ur a mood-enhancer all
on ur ownsum (yep-yep) ;)
~d
lmsao @ ur electric spinach (yumz much).. one day, we shall raze helz lady ;)
spankin' mwahs on u doll, ur a mood-enhancer all
on ur ownsum (yep-yep) ;)
~d
21st Jun 2015 12:48pm
brickbat....heavy hard-one & grit'dirty too
indelicate bric'a'brac, still all ways breaking
21st Jun 2015 1:50pm
yeps, been dustin' myself off fer daaayz now..
(checks progress)...n'back to the spicket fer
more waters..*and low grrz
a pleasure alwyz, sweet sirz o D! ty-ty ;)
lil curtsy
~d
(checks progress)...n'back to the spicket fer
more waters..*and low grrz
a pleasure alwyz, sweet sirz o D! ty-ty ;)
lil curtsy
~d
