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She *
her feet dance upon rose petals
scents permeate from her body
pheromones like beckoning fingers
drifting into male senses
the languid movement of her arms
embracing all that look sweepingly
enchanting her beloved with a gesture
lips moist ready for kisses
the beauty of her womanhood
is on her strength of her hope
the softness of her love
and the faith in her belief.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading.*
scents permeate from her body
pheromones like beckoning fingers
drifting into male senses
the languid movement of her arms
embracing all that look sweepingly
enchanting her beloved with a gesture
lips moist ready for kisses
the beauty of her womanhood
is on her strength of her hope
the softness of her love
and the faith in her belief.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading.*
Published 25th May 2015
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25th May 2015 10:45am
I find the second stanza intriguing, erotic A delicate write . . . . womanhood also subtle.This little poem treads a narrow path from which one could fall I like it.I Dryad
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26th May 2015 6:57pm
I like your definition of true feminine beauty in the last stanza. Men could use some of that softness.
28th May 2015 1:12am
Alas not all men Crowfly. Some like the bold brazen type that will leave in a minute just to make a stand.:) thank you so much for being here.
Anonymous
27th May 2015 7:04pm
As the old saying goes, you painted a picture with your words here. I can visualize this... Absolutely beautiful!
28th May 2015 1:13am
Anonymous
29th May 2015 4:31pm
This was far more enticing to me than I am sure you meant it to be. The first stanza captured me. Erotic yes, love filled yes, hint of dominance and submissiveness in one...yes in both directions. Good stuff
2nd Jun 2015 5:05am
Thank you Slowgasm for reading. I love it when you get it. I like your name too.:)
