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[ nonsense ] Barn Star
In and out
in and out
goes my award winning cock
Pullet!
Pullet with a mullet
strutting like the rock star
that he is, going
in and out
in and out
of the hen house
While yours?
'Tis nothing but a lousy grouse---
just another groupie
chick waiting in line to get
laid
in and out
goes my award winning cock
Pullet!
Pullet with a mullet
strutting like the rock star
that he is, going
in and out
in and out
of the hen house
While yours?
'Tis nothing but a lousy grouse---
just another groupie
chick waiting in line to get
laid
Published 22nd Apr 2015
| Edited 29th Jun 2020
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22nd Apr 2015 4:13pm
Your poem on the other hand is not award winning. Hope your cock enjoys the pin that comes with its badge of honour
22nd Apr 2015 5:45pm
Most poetry has the potential to be improved, provided it is met with substantial critique. You have my undivided attention.
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2015 7:23pm
Haha! Fucking great comeback! I like you 😜
23rd Apr 2015 5:43pm
This poem has great rhythm and style. I also like the how the title has the potential to skew the meaning of the poem.
