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Swinging in colours
silly love songs
from the radio
touch deep inside
flashback into yesteryears
pulsing neon lights
within euphoria
clasping hands
and dreams of Eden
no crash
please
just let me go home
she prays
she's lost.
from the radio
touch deep inside
flashback into yesteryears
pulsing neon lights
within euphoria
clasping hands
and dreams of Eden
no crash
please
just let me go home
she prays
she's lost.
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Re: Swinging in colours
Anonymous
8th Apr 2015 3:52pm
Beautiful. I can relate well to this.
Good to see you around, Grace :)
Good to see you around, Grace :)

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re: Re: Swinging in colours
9th Apr 2015 8:37am
Re: Swinging in colours
8th Apr 2015 4:54pm
beautiful vignette Grace. There is this song by Amos Lee, "Colors". it's lyrics sound as though they borrowed heavily from your ideal.....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=olp6DzzzSAk
...I admit that I am a bit prejudiced when it comes to your words : )
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=olp6DzzzSAk
...I admit that I am a bit prejudiced when it comes to your words : )
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re: Re: Swinging in colours
9th Apr 2015 8:39am
Re: Swinging in colours
Anonymous
8th Apr 2015 5:16pm
ah,this is so lovely and uplifting,dear Grace!

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re: Re: Swinging in colours
9th Apr 2015 8:49am
Re: Swinging in colours
8th Apr 2015 5:17pm
"Just let me go home"...this line is of a peculiar interest to me. Beautiful poem Grace.
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re: Re: Swinging in colours
9th Apr 2015 8:51am
Thank you dustyjjewels...yes, sometimes I want to be where I am really home. I thought I found it once. Who knows. Maybe my last home.:)
Re: Swinging in colours
8th Apr 2015 6:31pm
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this one touched me sentimentally more than you usually do. me quantifying it keeps me from gettin weepy
i can remember the throb, the failed chance
at vertical.. all that
felt.
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this one touched me sentimentally more than you usually do. me quantifying it keeps me from gettin weepy
i can remember the throb, the failed chance
at vertical.. all that
felt.
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re: Re: Swinging in colours
9th Apr 2015 9:36am
Re: Swinging in colours
9th Apr 2015 1:16am
Driving too fast... Radio blasting... Emotions and thoughts all in a scramble... Good read Grace
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re: Re: Swinging in colours
9th Apr 2015 9:40am