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Touch Me
Warm hands encircling
Tender flesh upon my chest
As you set it happily free
Breathing air once again
So sensitive to your touch
I sigh with relief for my hunger
This craving to be caressed
And devoured by your lips
Your tongue touches softly
To my buds of honeysuckle
Tasting the sweetness of my body
As I succumb to this gift of pleasure
Tender flesh upon my chest
As you set it happily free
Breathing air once again
So sensitive to your touch
I sigh with relief for my hunger
This craving to be caressed
And devoured by your lips
Your tongue touches softly
To my buds of honeysuckle
Tasting the sweetness of my body
As I succumb to this gift of pleasure
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Re: Touch Me
3rd Apr 2015 5:09am
Re: Touch Me
3rd Apr 2015 5:46am
Beautiful, simply beautiful.
Your words express so well
The experience of the moment.
Your words express so well
The experience of the moment.
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Re: Touch Me
3rd Apr 2015 7:22am
Re: Touch Me
3rd Apr 2015 6:09pm
Re: Touch Me
5th Apr 2015 2:16am
I wouldn't say it was too short. Why waste words? Yours are well chosen. Suffice it to say I really enjoyed this.
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Re: Touch Me
10th Apr 2015 3:08am
Re: Touch Me
4th Jul 2015 4:04am
Sensually delicious verse with just the right touch of naughtiness that awakens the craving to drink from the fountain of youth. Such sweet words make my insulin burn like a campfire on a hot Summers night... JJ
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4th Jul 2015 4:59am
re: re: Re: Touch Me
4th Jul 2015 5:20am
Well, I do like to let a poet know I actually read the poem and felt something. I absolutely hate those lame "great write", "wow, so moving" or even less comments that seem like canned, copy and paste comments. Lol, I can be so mean when somebody drops one of those bombs on my poetry, HA!
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Re. Touch Me
1st Apr 2018 8:25am