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Fireflies
Gazing at the fireflies
During our twilight rest
But then my lover parts her thighs
And shows them nature at its best
The fireflies circle and watch
And listen to our love
We shine and take it up a notch
Just for our friends above.
During our twilight rest
But then my lover parts her thighs
And shows them nature at its best
The fireflies circle and watch
And listen to our love
We shine and take it up a notch
Just for our friends above.
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17th Mar 2015 4:31pm
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Re: Fireflies
17th Mar 2015 4:45pm
I love fireflies, and I hope they don't mind me giving them voyeuristic attributes. They're the perfect witnesses to love, romance and everything that goes with it. Thanks Schiitaryn!
Re: Fireflies
17th Mar 2015 4:55pm
Lovely sweet lil poem with a sound image and reflection without absorbation.
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re: Re: Fireflies
17th Mar 2015 8:48pm
Thanks McJay. It's kind of a bed time story for adults. I try not to be Grimm about it.
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Anonymous
17th Mar 2015 5:04pm
well, around my neck of the woods they are lightning bugs! but fireflies is much more romantic. :)
nice little write, crow. made me smile.
nice little write, crow. made me smile.
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17th Mar 2015 8:44pm
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17th Mar 2015 7:47pm
HELLS YEAH!
So sweet is the nectar eh Crow ?!
Loves you xoxoxoxo
No I really do love you Thomas!!
Always
Zazzles xoxoxox
So sweet is the nectar eh Crow ?!
Loves you xoxoxoxo
No I really do love you Thomas!!
Always
Zazzles xoxoxox
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17th Mar 2015 8:46pm
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18th Mar 2015 00:51am
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18th Mar 2015 1:20am
Re: Fireflies
18th Mar 2015 4:46am
for a moment i thought i was the firefly gazing into the insides of a flowery valley lying sides by sides besides and with a voyeuristic inside a real lovers firefly kind of simple mind well hope you did grind
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18th Mar 2015 2:22pm
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18th Mar 2015 3:15pm
Re: Fireflies
18th Mar 2015 7:43am
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18th Mar 2015 2:23pm
Re: Fireflies
18th Mar 2015 11:31am
I love the way you use nature in this poem and lace it with eroticism. Very nice to read. Great job!
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18th Mar 2015 2:24pm
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Anonymous
20th Mar 2015 3:57am
WOWZERS Crow.....this is short but oh so sexy......let is shine baby.....enjoyed this.....xo :)
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20th Mar 2015 4:07am
I wonder how fireflies act around flowers? I'll bet they're on their best behavior. Or fun behavior. Or both. Thanks Flower!
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Anonymous
20th Mar 2015 4:14am
Now that's a wonder to investigate.....LOL!!!! Xo :)
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Re: Fireflies
22nd Mar 2015 9:31am
That's a cool audience to love for. Mother nature makes a good blanket. Awesome release crowfly!
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