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When I've done something to please you, it makes me happy. Normally I'm Dominant and a pain in the ass to some people
I don't take direction well
A self starter by nature
When corrected of my transgressions
I usually get defensive
Though no harm was meant
So if I do something to please you
And it makes you happy
I'm glad it worked out that way
It may be awhile before I please you again
But even if I'm not, I'm still thinking about it
A self starter by nature
When corrected of my transgressions
I usually get defensive
Though no harm was meant
So if I do something to please you
And it makes you happy
I'm glad it worked out that way
It may be awhile before I please you again
But even if I'm not, I'm still thinking about it
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Re: When I've done something to please you, it makes me happy. Normal
Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 11:57am
such a nice confession. i'm sure the intended party would be happy to hear it.
(how do you feel about half a pastry? lunch is a long way off.)
(how do you feel about half a pastry? lunch is a long way off.)
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Re: When I've done something to please you, it makes me happy. Normal
4th Jan 2015 12:03pm
What do you have in mind on the pastry front ?
I'm usually pretty sugar-free in the morning.
Plain Greek yogurt, some black or blueberries, a little mango and some pumpkin seeds is my usual
entry to the day. Though yesterday I had an egg salad sandwich.
I'm usually pretty sugar-free in the morning.
Plain Greek yogurt, some black or blueberries, a little mango and some pumpkin seeds is my usual
entry to the day. Though yesterday I had an egg salad sandwich.
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 12:06pm
sugar free in the mornings? well that limits...much.
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4th Jan 2015 12:07pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 12:09pm
i appreciate the offer. but i would not want to disrupt your morning ritual. they are vital to a good day.
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4th Jan 2015 12:11pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 12:15pm
well. then, it's good for you that i am no corrupter. i am positively saint like.
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4th Jan 2015 12:17pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 12:17pm
truth that you believe?
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4th Jan 2015 12:26pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 12:28pm
real, you say?
i read until my eyes are sandy and scratchy. way into the night, when it is quiet and so dark.
i put on a brazen front to cloak my insecurities.
i read until my eyes are sandy and scratchy. way into the night, when it is quiet and so dark.
i put on a brazen front to cloak my insecurities.
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4th Jan 2015 12:36pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 12:40pm
Sela? well she is quite the brazen one. she would likely climb into foster's lap and forget about any insecurities whatsoever. he has that effect on her.
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4th Jan 2015 12:43pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 12:45pm
that is a good question, sir. one that i'm not sure that i am prepared to answer.
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4th Jan 2015 1:47pm
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 1:54pm
yes. with a side of you telling me a real truth.
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Re: When I've done something to please you, it makes me happy. Normal
4th Jan 2015 2:04pm
I always tell the truth, unless I'm lying to protect someone. Though that's more of a business thing.
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2015 2:13pm
so tell me a truth, poet! tell me something that i do not know.
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Re: When I've done something to please you, it makes me happy. Normal
4th Jan 2015 3:17pm
So you sometimes need females to clap their hands to your pleasantries? Clap clap clap!
Chi is a bitch, isn't she? But she just pulls your leg ...
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Chi is a bitch, isn't she? But she just pulls your leg ...
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Re: When I've done something to please you, it makes me happy. Normal
4th Jan 2015 5:31pm
Hmm, you've said that bitch thang before, I believe you ....
But it's ok, I can be somewhat of a Bastard to compliment your bitchness
Dig ?
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But it's ok, I can be somewhat of a Bastard to compliment your bitchness
Dig ?
xx
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4th Jan 2015 6:31pm
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4th Jan 2015 7:01pm
Re: When I've done something to please you, it makes me happy. Normal
4th Jan 2015 7:54pm
I do my best. Not a boy scout, or a man scout for that matter either
Just a poet ...
Just a poet ...