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A GREAT PUZZLE
From the top of her long, silky hairs
To her beautiful, sun-licked, shining face
To the tip of her soft, curved breasts
To midway between her sweet, warm thighs
To the bottom of her long, strong feet
She is one great puzzle
A great treasure to be hunted
A mystery to be admired
A land to be explored
A journey to be undertaken..
To her beautiful, sun-licked, shining face
To the tip of her soft, curved breasts
To midway between her sweet, warm thighs
To the bottom of her long, strong feet
She is one great puzzle
A great treasure to be hunted
A mystery to be admired
A land to be explored
A journey to be undertaken..
Published 16th Dec 2014
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16th Dec 2014 7:56pm
Great poem naked_soul - you have conveyed that passionate obsession really well.
17th Dec 2014 2:30pm
18th Dec 2014 1:01am
Fine job, Naked Soul. Considering a woman as a mystery, a land unknown. I would consider her both a challenge and a comfort if I got lost. Which I'm inclined to do.
18th Dec 2014 7:22pm
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19th Dec 2014 7:03am
Lovely. Her "sun-licked, shining face" - beautiful line. Will definitely check out more of your work...
19th Dec 2014 2:36pm
Thankyou @toniscales. You boosted my confidence!!!
Checkout the book Naked Soul Poems coming this February...
Checkout the book Naked Soul Poems coming this February...
