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Narcotic Delirium
You’ve been clean for weeks
Or so you say,
Your eyes were clear and clean
For a minute.
And then red again, thick and dark,
You stumble around, fumble, mumble,
Pull my shirt up, find my breasts
And put your mouth over my nipple
Your tongue sophisticated, conjuring,
Unfolding soft and sultry petals
And I can’t help but wonder
Where you’ve learned this
Who’ve you done this to before
And maybe I don’t care.
You are conjuring a violent ecstasy
That I fear you can’t appease.
Or so you say,
Your eyes were clear and clean
For a minute.
And then red again, thick and dark,
You stumble around, fumble, mumble,
Pull my shirt up, find my breasts
And put your mouth over my nipple
Your tongue sophisticated, conjuring,
Unfolding soft and sultry petals
And I can’t help but wonder
Where you’ve learned this
Who’ve you done this to before
And maybe I don’t care.
You are conjuring a violent ecstasy
That I fear you can’t appease.
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Re: Narcotic Delirium
5th Dec 2014 8:21pm
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5th Dec 2014 8:56pm
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5th Dec 2014 8:22pm
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5th Dec 2014 8:26pm
Your last couple of poems are very sexy, and at the same time capture a darker feeling; a disappointment. It is beautiful and sad, and uses very sensual descriptions all at the same time. I say this a lot but I love reading your stuff. You are very talented.
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re: Re: Narcotic Delirium
5th Dec 2014 8:57pm
Been a strange couple of days is all. And yes, that's all exactly right. Disappointment, dissatisfaction. All there. And thanks for reading my stuff....
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18th Dec 2014 10:36pm
You better stop it before it get started, because disappointment can be a motherfucka.
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Re: Narcotic Delirium
30th Dec 2014 5:45pm
This is very erotic, Virginia. It's too bad that the regressed addict probably won't be able to follow through the enhanced technique he brought to the foreplay. Narcotic delirium stops him cold.
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