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There is nothing wrong
With lifting your face
To the scorching sun
And screaming
Until your pain streaks the sky
With lifting your face
To the scorching sun
And screaming
Until your pain streaks the sky
Published 18th Dec 2014
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18th Dec 2014 5:17pm
18th Dec 2014 5:30pm
18th Dec 2014 5:28pm
This was excellent...your words painted a vivid picture in my mind...enjoyed!!
18th Dec 2014 5:31pm
18th Dec 2014 5:54pm
THIS is deep! It captures very distinct moments/feelings I have had in life. It is concise, but powerful. Beautiful!
18th Dec 2014 8:00pm
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- Edited 18th Dec 2014 8:51pm
18th Dec 2014 8:50pm
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19th Dec 2014 7:07pm
I am almost sure I have done that :-)
excellent layered poem - love it :-)
excellent layered poem - love it :-)
22nd Dec 2014 4:50pm
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2014 5:52pm
No...there isn't..beautiful ink right when needed..
23rd Dec 2014 6:40pm
That scream would be primal and very effective. Great job, Virginiapetal. Could I have some of that caviar, by the way?
23rd Dec 2014 8:02pm
23rd Dec 2014 9:08pm
