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A Simple Whisk
Whisk me away for a few forbidden hour of today
Just to let me lay close to you
Then from time to time
Before you say goodbye
Remember to whisper quietly;
My dearest darling
I will always adore you.
Just to let me lay close to you
Then from time to time
Before you say goodbye
Remember to whisper quietly;
My dearest darling
I will always adore you.
Published 3rd Nov 2014
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4th Nov 2014 7:40am
4th Nov 2014 4:58pm
Thank you for sharing your thoughts Firemonkey; appreciate you so much for taking precious time to read and comment
4th Nov 2014 9:46pm
5th Nov 2014 00:10am
Poetikmind, thank you for your heart that takes time to encourage. Appreciate you for taking time to read and share your thoughts
18th Nov 2014 5:56am
18th Nov 2014 11:21am
Awwww Jamin79 ---this ink flowed from a honest moment of tenderness just like a whisper..a whisper. Wow, I am impressed that you picked that up! Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts; you have encouraged my heart and I like it!
