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O.G...Woman...
O.G.-W...
Oh god, woman...
so where do I begin?
guess it's your eyes, so sparkling
I can't help but to wonder
how you feel in your skin
Oh god, woman
blessed, like it's a sin
how soul-sustained
your body, and supple mind
feeds mine so sublime
Oh damn, so much I see
whenever I am seeking
the true essence of thee
Oh god...woman
what a wonder you are
an oasis...one sighs for
from afar
Oh god precious beauty
when will these questions cease?
because the night's unfolding
in my dreams once more
an I'm ever hopeful for
it's profoundly sweet release...
Oh god, woman...
so where do I begin?
guess it's your eyes, so sparkling
I can't help but to wonder
how you feel in your skin
Oh god, woman
blessed, like it's a sin
how soul-sustained
your body, and supple mind
feeds mine so sublime
Oh damn, so much I see
whenever I am seeking
the true essence of thee
Oh god...woman
what a wonder you are
an oasis...one sighs for
from afar
Oh god precious beauty
when will these questions cease?
because the night's unfolding
in my dreams once more
an I'm ever hopeful for
it's profoundly sweet release...
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Re: O.G...Woman...
3rd Nov 2014 7:22pm
Poe this is one hell of a beauty you've captured here.. sexually explosive is this ink :) with love Crim
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4th Nov 2014 00:51am
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4th Nov 2014 00:52am
In Anotha word...yay! lol I'm happy you thought so
highly of this my dear, truly appreciate you always :)
highly of this my dear, truly appreciate you always :)
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2014 8:09pm
I like how you call us 'oh god' lol
Most men act like they love/like women, but the truth of the matter is, they really want to demean them so that they feel superior..but you mr. pikm, you sure know how to love us inside out, upside down and sideways lol
Most men act like they love/like women, but the truth of the matter is, they really want to demean them so that they feel superior..but you mr. pikm, you sure know how to love us inside out, upside down and sideways lol
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4th Nov 2014 00:54am
Gosh u described me to a tee! lol
Thank you my sweetness, I deeply appreciate you lady! :)
Thank you my sweetness, I deeply appreciate you lady! :)
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3rd Nov 2014 9:14pm
Your ode to women is adorable, dear.
Love it! Some time, I'll create a haiku
just for you :-).
Love it! Some time, I'll create a haiku
just for you :-).
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4th Nov 2014 1:01am
You actually nailed it on the head Chi!
U lil smartie panties lol... Thank u sweetie,
Grateful for your support always :)
U lil smartie panties lol... Thank u sweetie,
Grateful for your support always :)
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3rd Nov 2014 10:32pm
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3rd Nov 2014 11:03pm
I will admit, at first I thought O.G stood for Ol' Gangsta.....
But this is waaayyyyyy better than I thought
What a charmer Poe! I bet she melted with this one?
Enjoyed looking into your heart ;)
But this is waaayyyyyy better than I thought
What a charmer Poe! I bet she melted with this one?
Enjoyed looking into your heart ;)
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4th Nov 2014 1:04am
In fact O.G. Stands for "Original Gangsta"
n yea it was what inspired my title, but the rest was just
so many amazing women in this world... :) thank you
so much sweetheart :)
n yea it was what inspired my title, but the rest was just
so many amazing women in this world... :) thank you
so much sweetheart :)
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4th Nov 2014 00:52am
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4th Nov 2014 1:05am
Aawww bro. u got me all ablush lol
Thanks a ton dude, truly appreciate you :)
Thanks a ton dude, truly appreciate you :)
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2014 2:21am
Sweet Poet......beautiful out flow of emotions and feelings to a very fortunate Lady who moves your soul. Enjoyed! Xo :)
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4th Nov 2014 2:51am
Nah sweetie, not ANYONE... Just women in general...
a tip of the hat sort of speak :) thanks a lot though my sweet one :)
a tip of the hat sort of speak :) thanks a lot though my sweet one :)
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4th Nov 2014 4:16am
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4th Nov 2014 12:30pm
Yup, can't deny you're right lol but I can thank you again n again! :) appreciate u as well
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4th Nov 2014 5:53am
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4th Nov 2014 1:05pm
Well I'm not bout that, but I certainly do love your vote
on the subject! lol thank you my precious one... :)
on the subject! lol thank you my precious one... :)
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4th Nov 2014 2:31pm
this was a Splendid Beauty!!!
love this line:
"what a wonder you are
an oasis...one sighs for
from afar"
love this line:
"what a wonder you are
an oasis...one sighs for
from afar"
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re: Re: O.G...Woman...
4th Nov 2014 9:38pm
Thank you my sweetness! Deeply n always grateful to you for your support my dear lady :)
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5th Nov 2014 3:27am
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5th Nov 2014 11:55am
Oh yea, sure remind me of how much I miss my Granny's
cooking! lol jk...
Thanks a ton, truly appreciate the support :)
cooking! lol jk...
Thanks a ton, truly appreciate the support :)
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6th Nov 2014 2:46pm
Such a beautiful write darlin
Must b a remarkable woman to have captured u n such a way PM
Must b a remarkable woman to have captured u n such a way PM
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6th Nov 2014 2:58pm
Thank u, but u misunderstand... It's an overall
Ode to women in general... I do appreciate ur thoughts my dear n ur support :)
Ode to women in general... I do appreciate ur thoughts my dear n ur support :)
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