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'Within the cloister of Mind'
I am
more...
than the strum
of my heart
I am
less
than a multitude
of breath...
I am more
a soul, for whom
any sole could attest...
I am
thought
comin' together
then fallin' apart
I am
more, or less,
truly bleedin'
the question...
'Who thou art?'
I am
less...
than the whole
of my bein'
I am
insufferable pain,
a vision
none has seen
I am more
yet, less than
all that I feel
I am
life...
so achingly real
oft' times so unreal...
more...
than the strum
of my heart
I am
less
than a multitude
of breath...
I am more
a soul, for whom
any sole could attest...
I am
thought
comin' together
then fallin' apart
I am
more, or less,
truly bleedin'
the question...
'Who thou art?'
I am
less...
than the whole
of my bein'
I am
insufferable pain,
a vision
none has seen
I am more
yet, less than
all that I feel
I am
life...
so achingly real
oft' times so unreal...
Published 31st Oct 2014
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31st Oct 2014 12:12pm
You are a brilliant man.
This was Awesome Poe! You are more than just a simple man.
Love this.
This was Awesome Poe! You are more than just a simple man.
Love this.
31st Oct 2014 12:53pm
Aaaaawwww u are too sweet! Thank u my dear, I truly
appreciate it n you... :)
appreciate it n you... :)
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31st Oct 2014 1:55pm
Precious Grace, thank you! I'm flattered n grateful always
for your support :)
for your support :)
31st Oct 2014 7:27pm
A brilliant piece of writing PM...
To be savoured as you read it out loud, slowly, at times whispering, and with such heart... :)
To be savoured as you read it out loud, slowly, at times whispering, and with such heart... :)
31st Oct 2014 10:41pm
Thank you sweet K, you're the best! :) I appreciate the continued support always :)
31st Oct 2014 7:47pm
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31st Oct 2014 8:48pm
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3rd Nov 2014 6:13am
31st Oct 2014 10:44pm
you are all this and more Poe Happy Halloween!!! great write with love Crim :)
31st Oct 2014 10:57pm
Oh my stars n garters! lol wow the C is back! Hi sweetie n thank you, grateful as always n happy Halloween to u too :)
1st Nov 2014 2:26pm
1st Nov 2014 5:11pm
Well it's always a compliment to provoke thought
when one spills ink so I'm happy... :) appreciate u sweetie!
when one spills ink so I'm happy... :) appreciate u sweetie!
2nd Nov 2014 3:17am
This is such a powerfully invoking write of epic proportions, with a constant flow reaffirming the dichotomous thought processes we all seem to endure, at some stage.
You've captured that dichotomous flow incredibly well.
You've captured that dichotomous flow incredibly well.
2nd Nov 2014 4:10am
Goodness, what a highly intellectual review!
I'm flabbergasted n humbled! :) thank u my friend :)
I'm flabbergasted n humbled! :) thank u my friend :)
4th Nov 2014 5:49am
4th Nov 2014 12:12pm
Aaaawwww mi amor! Thank you for that n hey you're pretty
freaking awesome yourself woman! :) appreciate u mucho! :)
freaking awesome yourself woman! :) appreciate u mucho! :)
7th Nov 2014 8:53pm
Your words are smooth as silk. You are complex simplicity! Bravo to your poetry and devotion to it...
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