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Still...
...A touch upon
the heart tenderly settles...
rescuing him from
deep slumber in sorrow's tomb
for emotions to wisk away
like a daffodil's petals
in flight on a sole journey
within persistent passion's swoon...
Yet, while he's a man
in need of serious loving
in the physical
those unrelenting tears fall silent
within an orchestra of solitude's pain
as a soul keeps pulling
at wanton urges...
it's almost mystical
how such blissful recollections
of yesterday's interludes
stubbornly refuse to wane...
still...battling on
in the name of love's consistant war
the prize for victory,
a key to the heart
that's keeps foolishly giving more...
the heart tenderly settles...
rescuing him from
deep slumber in sorrow's tomb
for emotions to wisk away
like a daffodil's petals
in flight on a sole journey
within persistent passion's swoon...
Yet, while he's a man
in need of serious loving
in the physical
those unrelenting tears fall silent
within an orchestra of solitude's pain
as a soul keeps pulling
at wanton urges...
it's almost mystical
how such blissful recollections
of yesterday's interludes
stubbornly refuse to wane...
still...battling on
in the name of love's consistant war
the prize for victory,
a key to the heart
that's keeps foolishly giving more...
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Re: Still...
21st Sep 2014 11:51am
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21st Sep 2014 11:57am
Thank you my friend, brother, poet... Deeply appreciate your thoughts n support always :)
Re: Still...
21st Sep 2014 12:22pm
Oh, Erotic ninja, luv :-* ~
This is such aching beauty.
You craft with the hand of a master, luv. ;-*
This is such aching beauty.
You craft with the hand of a master, luv. ;-*
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re: Re: Still...
21st Sep 2014 4:55pm
Aaaawwww how very sweet of u to that my dear... Thank u! Grateful as always for ur support :)
Re: Still...
21st Sep 2014 1:52pm
it's almost mystical
how such blissful recollections
of yesterday's interludes
stubbornly refuse to wane...
I love those words...I relate:) good read Poetik...so poignant in its delivery.
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re: Re: Still...
21st Sep 2014 4:57pm
Sweet Grace, u know I'm smiling now right?
I thank you kindly dear one, always appreciate you :)
I thank you kindly dear one, always appreciate you :)
Re: Still...
21st Sep 2014 4:11pm
Such a beatiful piece hun.....
There is such underlying sorrow
Within ur words as well.
But without a few tears we cannot truly appreciate the smiles
There is such underlying sorrow
Within ur words as well.
But without a few tears we cannot truly appreciate the smiles
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re: Re: Still...
21st Sep 2014 4:58pm
Thank you my darling sweetness, n yea I agree with you
you lil genius... Appreciate ya! :)
you lil genius... Appreciate ya! :)
Re: Still...
22nd Sep 2014 00:20am
Your words leave me breathless....my mind ebbs and flows as you entangle me in your ink!
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re: Re: Still...
22nd Sep 2014 00:28am
Gosh how sweet your words... I'm very grateful to
be blessed by your thoughts n support :)
be blessed by your thoughts n support :)
Re: Still...
22nd Sep 2014 00:46am
I am the fool that can't stop giving, well done P.M. I'm forever a fan of yours!
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re: Re: Still...
22nd Sep 2014 1:10am
Re: Still...
22nd Sep 2014 4:31am
PM...such beautiful words...tears forming...such a talent you are...not to mention a beautiful soul.... :) xo
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re: Re: Still...
22nd Sep 2014 11:25am
Aaaawwww.... Thank you my dear, I'm humbled
n truly grateful...appreciate you much :)
n truly grateful...appreciate you much :)
Re: Still...
22nd Sep 2014 8:34pm
Po, you made me stop and breath hard with this one my friend. Wow such truth it made me tear a little bit. Feeling this ink deeply...
ITRLIG!
Always
your friend to the end
Broom Xoxox
still...battling on
in the name of love's consistant war
the prize for victory,
a key to the heart
that's keeps foolishly giving more...
ITRLIG!
Always
your friend to the end
Broom Xoxox
still...battling on
in the name of love's consistant war
the prize for victory,
a key to the heart
that's keeps foolishly giving more...
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re: Re: Still...
23rd Sep 2014 1:44pm
Broomie! So darling you are, n I'm super flattered for your RL add! Thank you do much, appreciate you always :)
Re: Still...
That is so breathtakingly beautiful, dear Poe. This romantic and passionate streak suits you so well. I'm swept away with awe by your brilliantly chosen words to open up our hearts to romantic feelings. Need to add this beautiful piece to my reading list! xo
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re: Re: Still...
23rd Sep 2014 1:46pm
Aaawww my wonderful Chi, how awesome it is
to get a RL add! Your visits as always leave me smiling
widely, n grateful always for your continued support :)
to get a RL add! Your visits as always leave me smiling
widely, n grateful always for your continued support :)
Re: Still...
26th Sep 2014 5:06am
re: Re: Still...
26th Sep 2014 11:14am
Aaaawww thank you sweetheart! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed this... Truly appreciate your support of my ink :)