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Markers , Momentos or a Box of Candy
I flew down to see my Mom
On her 90th birthday
I didn't tell her I was coming
The look on her face was priceless
when I walked through the door
What to bring other than me
was my dilemma
I wanted something more lasting
than a meaningless box of chocolates
Maybe a stuffed animal I thought
Though that was never something I would have
done before
The story reads better with the stuffed animal
But in the end I went traditional
with a nice box of candy
which we all enjoyed
My mom is not well
Struggling to hang on
We had the best visit we could
I'm hoping to keep coming back
to enjoy what time is left here
I think I made the right choice
on her present though
The gift of a son marking a moment
Later that day she said to me privately
"You really surprised me, you did good"
That was my gift on her birthday
A mother tried and true ...
On her 90th birthday
I didn't tell her I was coming
The look on her face was priceless
when I walked through the door
What to bring other than me
was my dilemma
I wanted something more lasting
than a meaningless box of chocolates
Maybe a stuffed animal I thought
Though that was never something I would have
done before
The story reads better with the stuffed animal
But in the end I went traditional
with a nice box of candy
which we all enjoyed
My mom is not well
Struggling to hang on
We had the best visit we could
I'm hoping to keep coming back
to enjoy what time is left here
I think I made the right choice
on her present though
The gift of a son marking a moment
Later that day she said to me privately
"You really surprised me, you did good"
That was my gift on her birthday
A mother tried and true ...
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Re: Markers , Momentos or a Box of Candy
7th Sep 2014 5:56am
Absolutely Beautiful A Tribute to your Mother...
You really stirred something inside me with this
one Poe!
Glad you're in my corner cause you Sir are a classy man!
Luv you
Broomie!
You really stirred something inside me with this
one Poe!
Glad you're in my corner cause you Sir are a classy man!
Luv you
Broomie!
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Re: Markers , Momentos or a Box of Candy
7th Sep 2014 7:40am
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7th Sep 2014 7:42am
A heartfelt read. xo, Devlin.
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Re: Markers , Momentos or a Box of Candy
7th Sep 2014 9:56am
Re: Markers , Momentos or a Box of Candy
7th Sep 2014 12:11pm
This is The most beautiful poem you have written as a mother; I know your mother ache to hold you in her arms♥ I am so very proud of you and LOVE the heart in your chest to care about the wonderful woman who calls you son. I wish more people felt and thought about moms like this. Our ars really do ache, we see you as the child you always are. Not the man you have grown to be maybe it is a mother thing♥ Thank you for this one it touches deeply to the place that is special in my heart♥ You did good!!! for your mom♥
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re: Re: Markers , Momentos or a Box of Candy
I love your comments.
You are so right on in explaining how a mother sees a son not as the man he has become but always as someone she has to protect. I fought that protection for many years and then accepted it finally as her way of giving her ultimate love to me.
Thank you for giving me your insight ...
xxo
You are so right on in explaining how a mother sees a son not as the man he has become but always as someone she has to protect. I fought that protection for many years and then accepted it finally as her way of giving her ultimate love to me.
Thank you for giving me your insight ...
xxo
Re: Markers , Momentos or a Box of Candy
7th Sep 2014 3:45pm
Ah, Granite, luv :-* ~
You are a veritable sweet gem! :-* We cannot help it, you know, this viewing you always as the sweet babe we held snuggled close to breast, vowing to protect with all our might... :-*
That is my experience, at least. You are right in ascertaining that it is your presence more than any other gift which is of utmost importance to her now. Love on, luv. :-*
You are a veritable sweet gem! :-* We cannot help it, you know, this viewing you always as the sweet babe we held snuggled close to breast, vowing to protect with all our might... :-*
That is my experience, at least. You are right in ascertaining that it is your presence more than any other gift which is of utmost importance to her now. Love on, luv. :-*
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Re: Markers , Momentos or a Box of Candy
7th Sep 2014 4:43pm
A moving poem, written by a son in honor of his loving mother. Heartfelt, Speak, love it.
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7th Sep 2014 4:51pm
Re: Markers , Momentos or a Box of Candy
7th Sep 2014 4:44pm
Thank you
I understand my role as a son completely different now. It took so long to accept what was obvious
xxo
I understand my role as a son completely different now. It took so long to accept what was obvious
xxo
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