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Quieting
I am a dot on the parchment of time.
I am a drop in the ocean.
There is a stillness between heartbeats.
There is the warmth of the sun reaching
across the sheets, bringing the morning.
I breathe, I am, I breathe...
Published 4th Sep 2014
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4th Sep 2014 6:37am
Short and sweet. Humble, small, but still grand. I can definitely feel this one, Atakti.
Anonymous
4th Sep 2014 10:30am
What I especially like, is the glint of hope behind the words....great lines!
4th Sep 2014 11:39am
Anonymous
5th Sep 2014 3:23am
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5th Sep 2014 11:19am
Reminds me of a Bukowski piece that starts ...“there is a place in the heart that will never be filled".
Both yours, and his, are beautiful in their simplicity and eloquence.
Bravo!
Both yours, and his, are beautiful in their simplicity and eloquence.
Bravo!
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