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Drakos
A thousand lives in a slitted blink,
then a slow,
fixed
stare.
Cosmic scatters shine
in the great eye,
deepest at dusk.
Armored muscles shift
in their tectonic rumblings
and iron talons flex.
A hot rush of wings presses
shadow grasses down.
In its wake, solemn silence vows
its return.
Published 3rd Sep 2014
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3rd Sep 2014 1:49pm
but a Black Arrow tears it's crown..
Tight and powerful! I'm down with Drakos!
Tight and powerful! I'm down with Drakos!
3rd Sep 2014 10:10pm
Anonymous
4th Sep 2014 00:28am
I like this powerful poem. :)
Anonymous
4th Sep 2014 10:21am
Makes me think of vultures, dragons and 3D games.
Enjoyed the write!
Enjoyed the write!
4th Sep 2014 4:54pm
Ahhh, Atakti, luv :-* ~
How you've captured the great creature in so few, well-chosen words! :-*
I've always had a particular partiality to these particular mythological dynamos.
You've done them a right justice here in poesy, luv. :-*
How you've captured the great creature in so few, well-chosen words! :-*
I've always had a particular partiality to these particular mythological dynamos.
You've done them a right justice here in poesy, luv. :-*
5th Sep 2014 5:05am
A thousand lives in a slitted blink,
then a slow,
fixed
stare.
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something deep and expansive, yet palpable and heart racing in your dragon universe with nebula eyes and deep ore claws, the conjuring in these words gives story to the magic of poetry, not sure why really, but this gem kinda blows me away, very cool
then a slow,
fixed
stare.
_________________________
something deep and expansive, yet palpable and heart racing in your dragon universe with nebula eyes and deep ore claws, the conjuring in these words gives story to the magic of poetry, not sure why really, but this gem kinda blows me away, very cool
7th Sep 2014 11:49am
