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Undress you with my words
They can see deep within you
Deeper than anyone has ever seen
See you so clearly
Hold you in its place
Hypnotic tones holding your gaze
It can pierce you through the heart
Touch you in places unknown
Areas you never knew existed
Lifting you with its strength
Hold you when you are down
Let my words invade you
Make your skin crawl
To the fevered thoughts I create
Melt away your fears
Upon knees that obey
Making your innocence crawl
To frayed edges of my voice
No matter how hard you try to hide them
My tongue will coax them to the surface
To taste the blood within them
A stained flavor
Is stitched to its fragile surface
I will sever them with my razor whispers
Upon my dark throne
Laced in my leather
Tighter than the fear you have carried
The ropes of scarred tissue
Familiar bars
You have become accustomed
As your home
From my dark dungeon
My caged bird in my prison
I will unlace your burdens
With whips and chains
For your scars I inhale
A sweet taste so divine
Pure
So pure
Why it is you
No longer hiding
I see you
With the words
Escaping from your body
Deeper than anyone has ever seen
See you so clearly
Hold you in its place
Hypnotic tones holding your gaze
It can pierce you through the heart
Touch you in places unknown
Areas you never knew existed
Lifting you with its strength
Hold you when you are down
Let my words invade you
Make your skin crawl
To the fevered thoughts I create
Melt away your fears
Upon knees that obey
Making your innocence crawl
To frayed edges of my voice
No matter how hard you try to hide them
My tongue will coax them to the surface
To taste the blood within them
A stained flavor
Is stitched to its fragile surface
I will sever them with my razor whispers
Upon my dark throne
Laced in my leather
Tighter than the fear you have carried
The ropes of scarred tissue
Familiar bars
You have become accustomed
As your home
From my dark dungeon
My caged bird in my prison
I will unlace your burdens
With whips and chains
For your scars I inhale
A sweet taste so divine
Pure
So pure
Why it is you
No longer hiding
I see you
With the words
Escaping from your body
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Re: Undress you with my words
18th Aug 2014 8:18pm
We all need to b undressed n such a way. Any woman to get that type of attention from u AS sir is receiving quite a gift indeed.
Absolutely love this darlin. Erotic masterpiece
Xoxoxoxo
Belle
Absolutely love this darlin. Erotic masterpiece
Xoxoxoxo
Belle
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re: Re: Undress you with my words
19th Aug 2014 2:53pm
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18th Aug 2014 8:39pm
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19th Aug 2014 2:54pm
Re: Undress you with my words
19th Aug 2014 2:46am
MASTERFULLY seductive ink bro!
I love it, sadly my list add is maxed out
otherwise this would be on it
I love it, sadly my list add is maxed out
otherwise this would be on it
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re: Re: Undress you with my words
19th Aug 2014 2:55pm
I have struggled with the same, so many good writers, only so many slots.
Awesome comment, greatly appreciated.
Awesome comment, greatly appreciated.
Re: Undress you with my words
19th Aug 2014 4:43pm
Darling Awakened.. it is soo good to see you writing once again.. wonderfully done ink here.. the words writ.. do exactly as the title would infer..drawing in..hypnotizing, undressing..holding, awakening desires locked inside..and releasing them...beautifully erotic. absolute joy to read. with deepest respect..domore
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19th Aug 2014 5:48pm
Thank you Domore,
I look forward to the days I may write more often. You lift me with your words, getting to my core as you understand me.
I look forward to the days I may write more often. You lift me with your words, getting to my core as you understand me.
Re: Undress you with my words
19th Aug 2014 7:31pm
*undress you with my words*<-yeah, you do that well, dontcha'?! Sexy as always......Xo
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19th Aug 2014 8:05pm
Re: Undress you with my words
20th Aug 2014 3:28pm
Hmmmm what a delicious thing...when words go deeper than touch. What a lovely tempting write.
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re: Re: Undress you with my words
20th Aug 2014 4:13pm
Victorian, Nice to see you have stopped in. Thank you for that. Thank you for tasting the depth of my poetry
Re: Undress you with my words
21st Aug 2014 8:49am
well now... oh my... my pulse seems to be racing everywhere.
you devastate the senses with this sensual piece, Sir
you devastate the senses with this sensual piece, Sir
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23rd Aug 2014 1:37pm
Thank you Miss Shadoe, it is always such a pleasure to feel your beat turning my pages, to have them effect you makes it worth while.
Re: Undress you with my words
22nd Aug 2014 5:51am
As, I loved the tone and control in this piece.
I thought the vibe was smooth and the feel was crisp! Thanks for sharing ")
Broom Xxxx
I thought the vibe was smooth and the feel was crisp! Thanks for sharing ")
Broom Xxxx
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Re: Undress you with my words
22nd Aug 2014 10:24pm
Naked and exposed before her Master is divine captivity, words of leather unlacing a her souls pursing layers, oh my, AwakenedSoul. Oh she does escape the bonds of reality through his pulsing breaths of heated elation and orgasmic sensations. Breathlessly captivated!
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23rd Aug 2014 1:45pm
One could only want
A blue so pure and clean
Beautiful and amazing
I hold my breath
To think
What an amazing place
To sail over the edge
Into the rich dark Blue
Where the Angel resides
Thank you Blue Angel
A blue so pure and clean
Beautiful and amazing
I hold my breath
To think
What an amazing place
To sail over the edge
Into the rich dark Blue
Where the Angel resides
Thank you Blue Angel
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24th Aug 2014 1:21am
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Re: Undress you with my words
14th Sep 2014 5:05am
ahh that so gets you a TWIRL CURTSY & A BOW, have you seen how many people you wrap with your words?! :)
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29th Oct 2014 1:32am
My dear Feenix, a treasure is all mine when a soul such as yours can be wrapped by mine.
Re: Undress you with my words
22nd Oct 2014 12:04pm
I was hypnotized with every word and when you wrote: "For your scars I inhale...A sweet taste so divine", it sent goosebumps all over my arms.
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23rd Oct 2014 1:06am
Goose bumps, most gracious comment one can receive. I am honored you have laid your gifted poetess vision upon my pages.
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4th Nov 2014 00:15am
Thank you, I will confess that red heads have a certain hold that always catches my attention.
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Anonymous
3rd Dec 2014 2:42pm
Wow! This is an amazing write... You had me hooked on the first line.
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