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Yours and Mine
Behind the screen,showering you with love,
cleansing your soul along with mine.
The warmth of it all,
cascading around my heart,
flowing within,
your cries being heard
once again.
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re: Re: Yours and Mine
6th Jun 2014 3:24pm
Re: Yours and Mine
6th Jun 2014 7:11pm
Rose, you are such a giving woman...what a lucky man...lol
Love the words used -cleansing the soul!
Love the words used -cleansing the soul!
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re: Re: Yours and Mine
6th Jun 2014 7:13pm
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6th Jun 2014 7:28pm
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6th Jun 2014 7:34pm
Delicious..funny that :)
he was saying only last night how Delicio..oh nevermind :)
xD
he was saying only last night how Delicio..oh nevermind :)
xD
Re: Yours and Mine
6th Jun 2014 7:28pm
yes we too enjoyed this way but that was long ago sucking and fucking in beaches and showers that was long a go then rolling on the sands and on billiard tables all nude but then that was long a go now my age is such it has to take a long time to go but that was not so long ago it still is long enough for the task assigned hoe it has a long way to go
your cockking is sexy
I am standing in Frrolicking
wish how I was in the shower
but then that would've been
yes long ago
now no more....
I take tym
to cummmmmmmmmmm
your cockking is sexy
I am standing in Frrolicking
wish how I was in the shower
but then that would've been
yes long ago
now no more....
I take tym
to cummmmmmmmmmm
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re: Re: Yours and Mine
6th Jun 2014 7:35pm
Re: Yours and Mine
Anonymous
30th Jul 2014 4:33pm
Nice juxtaposition.... the picture turns the poem in a whole different direction. Well played.
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re: Re: Yours and Mine
30th Jul 2014 6:38pm
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Anonymous
30th Jul 2014 6:44pm
Pleasure... decided to try my hand at an erotic poem, curious what you think... http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/171767-feline-rapture/
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27th Aug 2014 5:03am