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wild
field of mums, dancing wild
fires burning, inside my soul
bare feet, taking in the soil
this is my territory, flesh to dust
scented winds, wrecking my hair
sister of nature, whispering earth
fires burning, inside my soul
bare feet, taking in the soil
this is my territory, flesh to dust
scented winds, wrecking my hair
sister of nature, whispering earth
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3rd Jun 2014 2:37pm
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3rd Jun 2014 2:55pm
This field is on my best friends property. ..she took a hundred pics of me in it yesterday before the farmers came to hay it. Thank you ;)
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3rd Jun 2014 4:37pm
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3rd Jun 2014 8:52pm
A time to be renewed in the bounty of splendor. I can feel the cool winds blowing and the smell of flowers everywhere. Enjoyed it.
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3rd Jun 2014 11:51pm
Exactly xmar82. ... Thank you for reading me. And thanks for the wonderful comment. :)
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3rd Jun 2014 9:58pm
Tommie in a beautiful field. Or beautiful tommie in a field! Whispering earth........ Beautiful
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4th Jun 2014 00:28am
I think your intimate relationship with nature is awesome. I love when you write about it. You live in such a beautiful part of the country too. One could hide in your field of flowers and stay there for days :)
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I'm very thankful that you enjoy my nature writes GW..I do love writing them. You have always been a wonderful voice for me. Thank you for reading me. ;)
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4th Jun 2014 1:56pm
A nature write...refreshing
N nicely done especially when
for the past few weeks all I've
been reading was relations between man n woman
Nice to have a change of pace here! :)
N nicely done especially when
for the past few weeks all I've
been reading was relations between man n woman
Nice to have a change of pace here! :)
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5th Jun 2014 1:21am
You're words are very appreciated. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it Poetikmind :)
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