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'Born... in this Guise'
As the sun is
to rise
stars, a twinkle
in the eyes
moon is
on a dark night
a sheen
'pon a lake...
it's light
everything
being relative
relative, to every thing
n' being...
in particular,
to the keen ocular
thy peripheral,
beneficial
to seeing...
water 'shed'
from clouds' high
as the window's seal
tries to steal
it's cry...
the thunder roars
n' ejects
a boom
a sea-set
to swell
to new heights soon...
the death of
something old
a birth of
something 'sowed'
it's that ever
familiar ying n' yang
forever being told...
please excuse
my muse
if perturbed
by what
it's relaying
-but
SO MUCH
is relevant
is all I'm saying...
to rise
stars, a twinkle
in the eyes
moon is
on a dark night
a sheen
'pon a lake...
it's light
everything
being relative
relative, to every thing
n' being...
in particular,
to the keen ocular
thy peripheral,
beneficial
to seeing...
water 'shed'
from clouds' high
as the window's seal
tries to steal
it's cry...
the thunder roars
n' ejects
a boom
a sea-set
to swell
to new heights soon...
the death of
something old
a birth of
something 'sowed'
it's that ever
familiar ying n' yang
forever being told...
please excuse
my muse
if perturbed
by what
it's relaying
-but
SO MUCH
is relevant
is all I'm saying...
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 29th May 2014
| Edited 4th Jun 2014
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Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
Anonymous
29th May 2014 11:57am
it is all relative..well said!
a dreamy, mgical sort of piece..one to ponder
nice work :)
a dreamy, mgical sort of piece..one to ponder
nice work :)
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re: Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 12:13pm
Whoa precious one! Didn't know anyone was here
this early! lol thank you my friend, appreciate you always :)
this early! lol thank you my friend, appreciate you always :)
re: Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 7:18pm
Howdy stranger! lol been awhile since I last from you
But I'm happy see you back :) truly thank n appreciate you
my natural one :)
But I'm happy see you back :) truly thank n appreciate you
my natural one :)
Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 12:25pm
i love the word play here Poe, such a clever write that really gets my soggy brain working this afternoon. enjoyed xo
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re: Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 7:20pm
I so love to know you found this stimulating
for your brain, guess if I can't enjoy stimulating the body
at least I can the mind lol
Thank u mami, appreciate u! :)
for your brain, guess if I can't enjoy stimulating the body
at least I can the mind lol
Thank u mami, appreciate u! :)
Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 2:44pm
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29th May 2014 7:21pm
Thank you my sweetness! So glad you thought so...
Deeply grateful for ya :)
Deeply grateful for ya :)
Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 3:27pm
Mr Poe.. you know how to get ones brain tickn.. nice thinking piece of work here.. truly enjoyed..muah!! domore
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re: Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 7:23pm
Mrs. Do Mo, you surely know how to illicit
giddiness! lol appreciate you always :)
giddiness! lol appreciate you always :)
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29th May 2014 3:35pm
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29th May 2014 7:24pm
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29th May 2014 7:54pm
Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 6:12pm
Love this, you surprise me sometimes, I see you can write is most any genre..
Hugs
Broomie
Hugs
Broomie
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re: Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 7:26pm
Broomie! Wuz up? lol thank you!
Yea I guess I can, been at it for a bit
so I feel versatility was important
in what we all do sooooo... Lol
Thank a ton my dear :)
Yea I guess I can, been at it for a bit
so I feel versatility was important
in what we all do sooooo... Lol
Thank a ton my dear :)
Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
Anonymous
29th May 2014 9:54pm
Brilliantly expressed. I really enjoyed this ^-^
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re: Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 11:27pm
Thank you for your sweet praise, I'm truly grateful
N I will return the favor soon :)
N I will return the favor soon :)
Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
29th May 2014 10:22pm
...creative read, found myself going into several directions while reading. Wordplay was fab as usual...Xo
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29th May 2014 11:29pm
My sweet loving Rain, I soak up your warmth!
Thank you sweetness, glad you enjoyed n appreciate
always! :)
Thank you sweetness, glad you enjoyed n appreciate
always! :)
Re: 'Born... in this Guise'
30th May 2014 9:29am
Loved it :) .. feed my hunger today for beautiful poems... this made my day
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30th May 2014 11:04am
What a sweet sweet comment :) thank you!
I'm truly grateful for your thoughts on my ink :)
I'm truly grateful for your thoughts on my ink :)
Re. 'Born... in this Guise'
7th May 2016 5:58pm
This is truly lovely; from the imagery to the feel and the flow; do I see beauty here? Yes, yes I do.
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Re: Re. 'Born... in this Guise'
7th May 2016 10:12pm
Aaaawww I'm aoooooo honored!! Thank I so much my sweetheart... Truly grateful for all the thoughts n support :)