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'Sins of the Farther...'
...I go...
into the dark
sights unseen ignite a spark
flinging indiscriminate matter
mining the matters of the heart
the head reels, like steel barriers
it's wall, static...this habit to
grab at it, that undefinable
essence of something tangibly
intangible...nothingness encompassing a wholeness
yet the emptiness in this
ebony abyss
still somehow,
the ink's mistress
persists to dismiss
the true purpose
of the absolute genesis
of a bright sight
as it flickers, enmasse
and sparkles alight...
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Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 00:43am
Good to see you back writing.. your voice has been missed :) with comforting hugs sent your way.. xoxo domore
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8th May 2014 11:16am
Yea, truly I was not gonna post anything for a while
But that damn VOICE inside wouldn't shut up
Soooooo... Lol thank you sweetheart, appreciate it much :)
But that damn VOICE inside wouldn't shut up
Soooooo... Lol thank you sweetheart, appreciate it much :)
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
Anonymous
8th May 2014 00:48am
Yes welcome back. You have puzzled my mind with this one. LOL!!! Xo :)
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re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 11:17am
Puzzled? The clue is in the TITLE lol
Hope that helps my dear :) n thanks a ton
I am as always, grateful for your support :)
Hope that helps my dear :) n thanks a ton
I am as always, grateful for your support :)
re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 11:18am
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 1:25am
re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 11:20am
Thanks bro. It may be a lil off n on for a bit, but we'll see.
Appreciate your support always :)
Appreciate your support always :)
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 2:03am
"this habit to grab at it, that undefinable essence of something tangibly
intangible"
this was a complete mind fuck Poe, but brilliantly so. i'll have to reread it in the morning and see where else it decides to take me.
intangible"
this was a complete mind fuck Poe, but brilliantly so. i'll have to reread it in the morning and see where else it decides to take me.
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re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 11:30am
Oh my sweet beauty fucking your mind
(or anything else on you lol) is my pleasure
so long as you absolutely enjoy it lol
Thank you so much, I'm def. Flattered you
plan on reading again! Adore you Mami :)
(or anything else on you lol) is my pleasure
so long as you absolutely enjoy it lol
Thank you so much, I'm def. Flattered you
plan on reading again! Adore you Mami :)
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 8:29am
This left me speachless, Poe. This is a wonderful yet dolorous poem. Your brilliant wording adds to its depth and beauty.xx
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re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 11:31am
Aaaaawwwww thank you my sweetness
Truly, n deeply grateful for your praise n support :)
Truly, n deeply grateful for your praise n support :)
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 12:52pm
"Mining the matters of the heart"wonderful allegory..I know all to well the depths of that all encompassing darkness... this made me envision a miner fumbling around stumbling in the dark then remembering to turn on the light on the top of his head!!
"The true purpose of the absolute genesis" indeed every genesis leads to a revelation,and every revelation has a genesis..every end is a begining...im sorry for rambling on in my comment..this was moving, has me thinking of my granny and feeling some type a way...anyways i love how this unfolded...welcome back..I have missed ur pen!!!
"The true purpose of the absolute genesis" indeed every genesis leads to a revelation,and every revelation has a genesis..every end is a begining...im sorry for rambling on in my comment..this was moving, has me thinking of my granny and feeling some type a way...anyways i love how this unfolded...welcome back..I have missed ur pen!!!
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re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 1:05pm
My precious friend, ramble on as long as you wish
I love your thoughts n actually I'd hardly call it 'rambling'
Thanks n I truly appreciate u my sweetness :)
I love your thoughts n actually I'd hardly call it 'rambling'
Thanks n I truly appreciate u my sweetness :)
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 4:46pm
Poe you are poetic genius mining your mind and coming up with poetic gems every time :) with love Crim
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re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 5:04pm
Thank you my sweetness :) that just made my day! :)
Forever n always I appreciate you :)
Forever n always I appreciate you :)
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 7:48pm
"essence of something tangibly
intangible...nothingness encompassing a wholeness
yet the emptiness in this
ebony abyss"<--oh man, you brought the thunder and it was loudly sensational.
Glad to see you're inking, trying to fill the void in your 'mind' to pass time....Xoxo
intangible...nothingness encompassing a wholeness
yet the emptiness in this
ebony abyss"<--oh man, you brought the thunder and it was loudly sensational.
Glad to see you're inking, trying to fill the void in your 'mind' to pass time....Xoxo
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re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
8th May 2014 11:09pm
Hey my dear sweet Rain... Yea you're dead on, trying to
shift my focus n it may not be consistent yet but I will try
An get back in the swing of things... Thank you so much
Truly appreciate your support :)
shift my focus n it may not be consistent yet but I will try
An get back in the swing of things... Thank you so much
Truly appreciate your support :)
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
Wow wow, that was beautifully clever
-->still somehow,
the ink's mistress
persists to dismiss
the true purpose
of the absolute genesis
of a bright sight
as it flickers, enmasse
and sparkles alight... Fantastic imagery.
I knew you were a gifted preacher indeed!
I absolutely adore this and then some.
really nicely written
Poetikmind.
Zazzles Xo
-->still somehow,
the ink's mistress
persists to dismiss
the true purpose
of the absolute genesis
of a bright sight
as it flickers, enmasse
and sparkles alight... Fantastic imagery.
I knew you were a gifted preacher indeed!
I absolutely adore this and then some.
really nicely written
Poetikmind.
Zazzles Xo
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Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
9th May 2014 5:10am
Aaaaawwww why thank you my sweet dear one! Many big wet kisses for you :) truly grateful for your support
re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
10th May 2014 12:45pm
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
10th May 2014 3:33am
Mmmm the depths you possess with these words here.
I was just beginning to miss your poetry..
i read it like 3 times hah, love your choice of words, far from ordinary more like extraordinary!
I would quote but it's be the whole poem.
Diggin' the imagery yet dark reality i felt in this!!
I was just beginning to miss your poetry..
i read it like 3 times hah, love your choice of words, far from ordinary more like extraordinary!
I would quote but it's be the whole poem.
Diggin' the imagery yet dark reality i felt in this!!
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re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
10th May 2014 12:49pm
DHC my baby you make me melt :) thank you
so much I'm truly humbled by your words n deeply appreciate them n you :)
so much I'm truly humbled by your words n deeply appreciate them n you :)
Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
Anonymous
13th May 2014 3:11pm
Simply put I loved it!
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re: Re: 'Sins of the Farther...'
13th May 2014 7:15pm
Well that's a simply wonderful compliment! Thank you lady
I truly appreciate it :)
I truly appreciate it :)
Re. 'Sins of the Farther...'
14th Jun 2016 3:34am
The syllabic rhyme cuts in an ingenuitive way, pulls me in like a serpent's sway, back and forth. An interesting and creative take on our mistress and the art of the quill. Namaste.
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14th Jun 2016 3:47am
Your comments always make me smile bro. Becuz I can feel the sincerity within...truly grateful always :)