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The Devil's Chosen Warriors
Hell's angels they call us
the fallen ones
a band of brothers we are
shoulder to shoulder we stand
ever so proud
we fight for our beliefs
never bowing down
in and out of hell we ride
fighting for freedom
with his rules we can not abide
love where love is necessary
war where war is necessary
this is our creed
we're all heart
he will never tame us
riding on in the heart's of true men
loyal soldiers we are
we live eternal
fighting for our metal
not afraid to bleed for our cause
the sun, moon and stars
we claim them all
the Earth is already ours
so show some respect
for hells riders as they pass by
they are my brothers
never saying die
streets of old streets of gold
Lucifer claims for His men
a gift to them
they will ride free forever
not broken by heaven
the fallen ones
a band of brothers we are
shoulder to shoulder we stand
ever so proud
we fight for our beliefs
never bowing down
in and out of hell we ride
fighting for freedom
with his rules we can not abide
love where love is necessary
war where war is necessary
this is our creed
we're all heart
he will never tame us
riding on in the heart's of true men
loyal soldiers we are
we live eternal
fighting for our metal
not afraid to bleed for our cause
the sun, moon and stars
we claim them all
the Earth is already ours
so show some respect
for hells riders as they pass by
they are my brothers
never saying die
streets of old streets of gold
Lucifer claims for His men
a gift to them
they will ride free forever
not broken by heaven
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24th Apr 2014 4:55am
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24th Apr 2014 5:11am
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24th Apr 2014 3:54pm
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24th Apr 2014 5:15am
"Not broken by heaven." I love this line. It sums up this piece nicely. Great work.
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24th Apr 2014 3:55pm
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24th Apr 2014 6:10am
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24th Apr 2014 8:22am
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24th Apr 2014 3:56pm
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24th Apr 2014 9:11am
yes...the last liner is truly summative & essence of the whole hell war-rides that goes on ..loved that,'hell's angels" they are called . beautiful work, thank you for the read.
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24th Apr 2014 3:57pm
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24th Apr 2014 1:58pm
this is darkly beautiful Brenda, i love the theme your words have taken on of late.
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re: Re: The Devil's Chosen Warriors
24th Apr 2014 3:58pm
thank you lovely Kat your visits are always cherished and dear to my heart :) with love Brenda
Re: The Devil's Chosen Warriors
24th Apr 2014 2:38pm
"streets of old streets of gold
Lucifer claims for His men
a gift to them
they will ride free forever
not broken by heaven"
^^^^^dammit, if that wasn't an awesome stanza,
I don't know what is...This ink rocked, Crim! Xo
Lucifer claims for His men
a gift to them
they will ride free forever
not broken by heaven"
^^^^^dammit, if that wasn't an awesome stanza,
I don't know what is...This ink rocked, Crim! Xo
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24th Apr 2014 3:58pm
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24th Apr 2014 3:18pm
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24th Apr 2014 3:59pm
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24th Apr 2014 4:01pm
Awesome write Crim, the subject manner, the effortless flow, the show ending stanza. Another example of your exemplar work
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24th Apr 2014 4:19pm
Re: The Devil's Chosen Warriors
24th Apr 2014 9:30pm
I feel like a parrot here but the line
"not broken by heaven", among others,
sticks in my head...
Loving this... to the reading list it goes!
"not broken by heaven", among others,
sticks in my head...
Loving this... to the reading list it goes!
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24th Apr 2014 10:26pm
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Anonymous
25th Apr 2014 2:10am
Did this give me goosebumps. Chilling excellent write. Xo :)
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25th Apr 2014 4:50am
Re: The Devil's Chosen Warriors
25th Apr 2014 2:02pm
"the sun, moon and stars
we claim them all
the Earth is already ours"
love that line,,, My Dad rode with Angel for a while before going to prison. "Live to ride, Ride to live" *bows to the riders* & to your tribute :)
we claim them all
the Earth is already ours"
love that line,,, My Dad rode with Angel for a while before going to prison. "Live to ride, Ride to live" *bows to the riders* & to your tribute :)
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25th Apr 2014 4:44pm
Re: The Devil's Chosen Warriors
26th Apr 2014 4:34am
Brenda, this poem is
fucking epic.
It's like you put 100 percent
knowledge into it.
It's a different style from you
but enjoyed immensely.
Keep it up
I wish you had a book of these
you little Lucifer. Lol
Pan
fucking epic.
It's like you put 100 percent
knowledge into it.
It's a different style from you
but enjoyed immensely.
Keep it up
I wish you had a book of these
you little Lucifer. Lol
Pan
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26th Apr 2014 4:08pm
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28th Apr 2014 10:28pm
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28th Apr 2014 11:41pm
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The more I read you dear Crim....the more I wish to read... As I read this poem I swore I heard the Hells Angels riding down my road...nice...:) - Philip
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1st May 2014 4:45pm
thank you for reading me it's most appreciated pleased you enjoyed this write :) with love Crim
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Anonymous
2nd Dec 2014 9:23pm
this is beautiful.. thanks for sharing.. into the list it goes..
Dave
Dave
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2nd Dec 2014 10:08pm