Secret Lust

Please dont call me sir.

k I won't lol....

Great poem super sexy

thank you :) with love Crim

Mmmmm, mmmm, mmm! The Lovely Lady once again gives a clinic, x2. Highly skilled persuasions. Masterfully written prose.
Superb!

thank you VP for putting a smile on my face with your yummy comment :) with love Crim

You burn so ecstatically, doll!Many lovely images here.

thank you lovely one :) with love Crim

Good to be back reading your sexy hot ink. Mmmmmm! Enjoyed! Xo :)

thank you lovely Flower for making me smile :) with love Crim

rough lovers love reckless babes who love it rough.

this is a blaze of passion...

thank you kindly John I love you visits :) with love Crim

Wow! Really hot poem.

thank you kindly :) with love Crim

Blazing hot write. Brilliant stuff

thank you :) with love Crim

A very hot write once
again Brenda.
You are the QUEEN of,

"PORNOGRAPHIC
POETRY."

   I always enjoy what you think... Pan

thank you Pan for a most gracious comment :) with love Brenda

Damnit, you said you'd never tell of our
Secrets!! Shot now the 'meat's' out the bag lol
Truly, very hott spill lady, especially loved the imagery
You naughty lil vixen lol

Poe you always make me smile thank you :) with love Crim

great poem of lust and it's power.  Indeed the minds secrets holds some of our best lovers.

thank you Soul indeed they do :) with love Crim

"Arsenic kisses
poison ivy ligature"

this is one of those poems i wish i'd thought of first. steller ink Brenda xo

thank you most graciously beautiful Kat.. though ligature is a word you've used so stunningly poetic I hope you don't mind me using it lovely one.. I'm honored you took this to your reading list.. with love Brenda :)

Jesus Christ has come again!! [prematurely it's only Saturday]

"I burn at your arson touch" That's a great line and you've weaved the burning desire theme thru this piece very nicely. It's definitely hot, Crim!

thank you kindly Mr. Case :) with love Crim

shhhh....I wont tell a soul your secret lust, pinky-swear. :)
...soft and sensual porn, this ink. Lava hot and beautifully written, Crim! Xo

thank you lovely Rain :) with love Crim

Poets like you and Mia amaze me with these kind of writes.... I love it! :)

thank you graciously Kitty :) with love Crim

You have made fire a sexy thing! This was smoldering from the start, you fucking rock my lady!

thank you for such a gracious comment :) with love Crim

Imagery is just amazing.

thank you most graciously :) Crim

You delve deep into the heart of woman's wants and desires and hold nothing back...and you set the scene nicely...very enjoyable read.  So thanks... - Philip

thank you most graciously Sir :) with love Crim

There are too many great lines to quote here, Crim. I love your choice of words and how you balance the right amounts of filth, passion and beauty. I felt dirty me aroused while reading in a good way. Just from memory, some parts that stood out..

Burning at your arson touch
Petting my pussy, thinking of you
Pulling out just in time to cum in my face
Poisonous kisses from my cunt to my ass

Most potent and passionate pornographic  poetry Crim!

thank you for the most gracious comments you've given this ink.. with love Crim

Greatly enjoyed reading this erotic work spoken from the submissive's perspective.  Hotly expressed.  Brava!

thank you for your gracious comment with respect Crim

Yes please!! Great ink. Sexy, fun, and the kind uf sub im down with.

🍎J

thank you beautiful for reading this and showing love for this write :)

love Brenda

ur not only crimson but really unveiling

I put the fires
out      
petting my
pussy      
thinking
of you    

as u hold his

thank you most graciously Again :)

love Crim

you set me ablaze     
I put the fires out     
petting my pussy     
thinking of you     
     
   
all men also so do    
but I don't like lapping behinds  
 its diseases in kind    
 
petting my pussy     
thinking of you......  
 
 
you like my comments still you have blocked me why  do i cummmmm too often     
 
 
   
but would love to mouth it anytime    
ur poetry crimsony is sexily sublime




ur a good erotic poet so i like to read some and share with u but u block me coz  
of ur own doing  


petting my pussy   
thinking of you ...what then will HE DO?

thank you Again for revisiting this write of mine..

love Crim