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If You Love Her
Lay her down in a field of flowers,
warm kisses given tenderly in a shower.
With gentle hands caress her face,
give her a memory she'd be hard pressed to erase.
Show the difference between sex and love,
your past affairs, place her above.
When she feels scared give her your hand,
let her know you understand.
Ask her opinion on some things,
her thoughts important, is what this means.
At night hold her close upon your bed,
your shoulder let her rest her head.
Your actions and words should always match,
show her that you really care, that there's no catch.
Never rest your eyes upon a fight,
compromise or resolution, truthful "I love you"'s each
and every night.
Never put yourself in gear and coast,
the simplest things to her, can mean the most.
Please note..if you do for her, she should do for you,
it's really not about, just her view.
An equal amount of give and take,
the happy couple, this should make.
These basic things are not all tried and true,
they're just ideas of what you could do.
If you've loved and lost, this list is not to blame,
for every woman is different, no two the same.
warm kisses given tenderly in a shower.
With gentle hands caress her face,
give her a memory she'd be hard pressed to erase.
Show the difference between sex and love,
your past affairs, place her above.
When she feels scared give her your hand,
let her know you understand.
Ask her opinion on some things,
her thoughts important, is what this means.
At night hold her close upon your bed,
your shoulder let her rest her head.
Your actions and words should always match,
show her that you really care, that there's no catch.
Never rest your eyes upon a fight,
compromise or resolution, truthful "I love you"'s each
and every night.
Never put yourself in gear and coast,
the simplest things to her, can mean the most.
Please note..if you do for her, she should do for you,
it's really not about, just her view.
An equal amount of give and take,
the happy couple, this should make.
These basic things are not all tried and true,
they're just ideas of what you could do.
If you've loved and lost, this list is not to blame,
for every woman is different, no two the same.
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Re: If You Love Her
Anonymous
13th Apr 2014 2:24pm
This is a beautiful and truthful write. I luv the sensuality of this. Simple things between two people are amazing. Luv this write. Xo :)
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re: Re: If You Love Her
14th Apr 2014 5:38am
Lovely flower.. thank you for the beautiful comment :) I am trilled you enjoyed this..hugs.. with love and respect.. xoxo domore
Re: If You Love Her
13th Apr 2014 2:59pm
Beautiful words from our own domore.
skilled reasoning between lovers
good words to live by ...
well done ....
skilled reasoning between lovers
good words to live by ...
well done ....
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re: Re: If You Love Her
14th Apr 2014 5:39am
Thank you Sir P... you make me smile with your words.. thank you for the read and the touching comment.. with deepest respect.. xoxo domore
Re: If You Love Her
13th Apr 2014 3:55pm
re: Re: If You Love Her
14th Apr 2014 5:41am
thank you my strong friend for your kind words.. you always inspire.. with love and respect.. xoxo domore
Re: If You Love Her
13th Apr 2014 5:53pm
This is like a testimony to a real deep love... N I loved it! Inspiring n beautiful stuff lady :)
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re: Re: If You Love Her
14th Apr 2014 5:43am
Thank you Mister P.. for the read and the wonderful comment.. I am so glad you liked!! with respect. xoxo domore :)
Re: If You Love Her
13th Apr 2014 5:56pm
poetic marriage counselling without the preaching. this is a beautifully heartfelt write, domore
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re: Re: If You Love Her
14th Apr 2014 5:48am
Thank you miss m :) your too kind.. and indeed I wrote this with the idea of what I'd like to have had in a relationship as inspiration.. :) with respect...xoxo domore
Re: If You Love Her
13th Apr 2014 10:53pm
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14th Apr 2014 5:49am
:) sweet Unloveable.. thank you sooo much for the read and the thoughtful comment.. I am humbled by the RL add :) thank you :) with respect.. domore
Re: If You Love Her
15th Apr 2014 7:56pm
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15th Apr 2014 7:59pm
thank you Hash!! I appreciate the read and the kind comment :) with much respect..domore
Re: If You Love Her
17th Apr 2014 7:48pm
re: Re: If You Love Her
17th Apr 2014 7:53pm
:) Thank you Pathos for the read and comment :) "the greatest of these is love" :) with respect ..domore :)
Re: If You Love Her
27th Apr 2014 2:37am
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28th Apr 2014 7:07am
Thank you Pan... I am pleased you enjoyed.. thank you for the read and comment.. with humility and respect.. domore
Re: If You Love Her
18th May 2014 7:13pm
Echo flowergirl and katja. Poem follows on well from its title, leads the reader in.
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re: Re: If You Love Her
19th May 2014 6:12am
Thank you Solomon_Song... I soo appreciate the read and kind comment :) with love and respect ..domore
Re: If You Love Her
12th Feb 2015 7:36am
Beautiful sounds like an amazing relationship the perfect one in fact so in love excellent ink :-)
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