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Tumbleweed
Turbulent tossing
In gusts of wind
Drifting weakly
In the dwindling breeze
Alone
No purpose
Like a tumbleweed
I've been horribly blocked these past few weeks. No matter what I want to write about nothing creative pleases me. Its a strange feeling.
In gusts of wind
Drifting weakly
In the dwindling breeze
Alone
No purpose
Like a tumbleweed
I've been horribly blocked these past few weeks. No matter what I want to write about nothing creative pleases me. Its a strange feeling.
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Re: Tumbleweed
4th Apr 2014 5:36am
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5th Apr 2014 10:46pm
Really nice! I can feel the isolation that is so relatable. The brevity is awesome.
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6th Apr 2014 8:26pm
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2014 6:59pm
You have been quiet Kitty and the thought occurred to me the other day when i realized you haven't been in threads or participating in comps so I came looking to see how you're doing and I found this.
I'm feeling your sense of isolation and 'quietness' I'm hoping its a passing phase, I know it is..you'll be ok, hugzz
I'm feeling your sense of isolation and 'quietness' I'm hoping its a passing phase, I know it is..you'll be ok, hugzz
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6th Apr 2014 8:27pm