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So Deathly Still

Sitting in the dark my blood runs cold
Now I realize how far from sane I truly am
Another sad story of a love gone wrong
Another day of a too bad so sad love song
But let the stars fall frown
Yeah just let the sun start to boil
When your sweet resistance
Turned into another night of rejection
I remember pacing and more hungry pacing
The drops of my sweat rained down in rivers red
Fascinated I stand in a blood stained reverie
This day of my river red, my river red
The day and hour my sanity took leave
The blade is stained and dirty why?
The blade will never wash clean
My soul is oh so dreary sister
Say a hail Mary for me please?
Why is she laying so deathly still?
Is that a river red running if you will?
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!
I RUN I RUN I RUN I RUN I RUN I RUN
So I do not see the reason why.....
You are laying , so deathly still.......
Written by violetsue (jaiamba)
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