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...ever gonna love again...
...words covered in dust,should have kept them
inside my treasure chest, locked up safely...
...he only used them once,they came off his
tongue clean and untangled,the power of love...
...how it can hurt so bad,I'm tired of words but
I want to hear it again,someone to love me back...
inside my treasure chest, locked up safely...
...he only used them once,they came off his
tongue clean and untangled,the power of love...
...how it can hurt so bad,I'm tired of words but
I want to hear it again,someone to love me back...
Published 10th Mar 2014
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10th Mar 2014 3:18pm
10th Mar 2014 3:20pm
10th Mar 2014 5:23pm
Oh to be sincerely and deeply loved, in the words of Hamlet, "Tis a consummation devoutly to be wished." Poignant piece, Tommie!
11th Mar 2014 11:15pm
10th Mar 2014 7:08pm
Joy took the words right out of my mouth!
there's nothing else for me to add or say.
there's nothing else for me to add or say.
11th Mar 2014 11:17pm
10th Mar 2014 11:06pm
Words that cut and bruise with every breath it speaks and yet at times it soothes with the want to be love a pain tht feels good. Beautiful write Tommie Lynn
11th Mar 2014 11:19pm
11th Mar 2014 00:39am
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12th Mar 2014 8:14pm
this is nice, it has a country song feel to it. it's a deep need, Tommie...
12th Mar 2014 10:19pm
14th Mar 2014 00:51am
its so easy for us to take words and use them, for any service but sometime the words, three words, come and use us - and all the more precious for it
