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Lack

I wish to lose myself and fill in the empty spaces
tommielynn
Written by tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)
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Re: Lack
(c.d.latin)
9th Mar 2014 00:41am
That seems to be the only way huh
Pathospassion
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re: Re: Lack
(Tommie Lynn)
9th Mar 2014 1:58am
Yes indeed Pathospassion,thank you for reading :)
tommielynn
Re: Lack
9th Mar 2014 1:51am
Booze, music, self-pleasure
PoetSpeak
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re: Re: Lack
(Tommie Lynn)
9th Mar 2014 1:59am
Yes, yes, yes...you got it Poet. ;)
tommielynn
Re: Lack
(Joy)
- Edited 9th Mar 2014 6:15am
9th Mar 2014 6:13am
Nice write, made me think :) Wishing it was longer.

I like to day dream, good to get away from reality once in a while. Video games helps too.
silhouettejoy
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re: Re: Lack
(Tommie Lynn)
9th Mar 2014 3:09pm
Thank you for reading Joy, I appreciate it :)
tommielynn
Re: Lack
(Antonio Duarte)
10th Mar 2014 11:27pm
Nothing like falling into a void. Awesome been there and love it every time
BlackSoul
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re: Re: Lack
(Tommie Lynn)
11th Mar 2014 11:59pm
Glad you can relate BS :)
tommielynn
Re: Lack
16th Mar 2014 4:05am
every box needs filled in..
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