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She is Light
She will seduce the dark, tiptoe in see through lace,
her delicates will harden you, leaving your mouth ajar,
your thoughts will breathe heavy, she'll reflect in your eyes,
imprisoned by her whispering body, you're in love with her light.
her delicates will harden you, leaving your mouth ajar,
your thoughts will breathe heavy, she'll reflect in your eyes,
imprisoned by her whispering body, you're in love with her light.
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Re: She is Light
18th Feb 2014 11:55am
You smashed this one TL. Beautiful lines Tommie. Straight up. Thank you. XO
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18th Feb 2014 6:56pm
This short write had me wondering...if indeed 'she' is indeed a character built in your own image?... ...(meant in a very complimentary way.)
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18th Feb 2014 7:56pm
Re: She is Light
18th Feb 2014 8:33pm
Lends itself to a pic in nighties. Favourite line (for the contrast within first four words):
Her delicates will harden you, leaving your mouth ajar.
Her delicates will harden you, leaving your mouth ajar.
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18th Feb 2014 8:40pm
Re: She is Light
18th Feb 2014 8:40pm
Tommie you do erotica in such a beautiful way I'm seduced by this poem :) much love Crim
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re: Re: She is Light
18th Feb 2014 8:43pm
Your words humble me Crim. I'm happy you enjoyed it, means much. :) thank you
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