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candyman
Candyman
Temptation at his finest
Sugary lips and cut up limbs
The soft melody of the bees
That follow
Running his tongue down me
bent forward
Tied to the bed post with
red licorice vines
Gagged with an over
sized jaw breaker
Cold metal hook pressed to my throat
I smell his decay
And to to please the bees
Flinching as melted caramel hits my back
Seeping down my already lubed crack
They gather and dance
Removing the gag to much relief
Rolling the jaw breaker down my ass
tightening against it
Slowly penetrating
Going deeper still
Until I take it in full
Hip to hip with one hand
Caressing my wet velvet lips
hook now teaseing my clit
letting me slip into bliss
befor i can move
his hook goes threw
to my rib cage releasing my guts
leaning forward
mumering into my ear
"sweets to the sweet"
fading the last thing i hear
is the buzzing of the bees
Temptation at his finest
Sugary lips and cut up limbs
The soft melody of the bees
That follow
Running his tongue down me
bent forward
Tied to the bed post with
red licorice vines
Gagged with an over
sized jaw breaker
Cold metal hook pressed to my throat
I smell his decay
And to to please the bees
Flinching as melted caramel hits my back
Seeping down my already lubed crack
They gather and dance
Removing the gag to much relief
Rolling the jaw breaker down my ass
tightening against it
Slowly penetrating
Going deeper still
Until I take it in full
Hip to hip with one hand
Caressing my wet velvet lips
hook now teaseing my clit
letting me slip into bliss
befor i can move
his hook goes threw
to my rib cage releasing my guts
leaning forward
mumering into my ear
"sweets to the sweet"
fading the last thing i hear
is the buzzing of the bees
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22nd Oct 2014 2:36am
Clever write, so different yet so close from what I expect. This was delicious and brutal...... Making it a awesome poetic twist
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29th Oct 2014 7:15pm
Very rich with contrasting elements. It's what happens when yin and yang mix, and the dark and the light show the vigor of the other. The light has pleasure, and the dark has pleasure, so pleasure becomes the new universal law as long as the method is wanted. The poem is so tantalizingly sweet and bitter like a warm exotic chocolate. I like it's taste. You did a great job.
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23rd Nov 2016 4:06am
I saw your reply about Clive barker. I just started reading The Books of Blood. This has a chilling effect to it, well done.
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Thank you. I haven't gotten to read The Books Of Blood yet but The Damnation Game by Clive is a good one to i'd recommend it.
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24th Nov 2016 2:07am
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this is a poem to fuck by if you love snuff and sadomasochism ... and oh yes i do and write about all the time too ..... maybe you ll check it out xoxo
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/260423-the-sadist-and-ophelia/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/260423-the-sadist-and-ophelia/
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28th Feb 2019 6:33pm
forgot about this freaking movie, you sure display an erotic side to it tight
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28th Feb 2019 6:45pm
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19th Aug 2019 11:49pm
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29th Aug 2019 3:30pm
Brava Foxx! Made me stiff and repulsed at the same time. You paint well the scene well and I love your tasty restraints 😀
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5th Jan 2020 1:14pm
Very expressive and very effective!
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9th Aug 2023 9:14am
Seeing what this was inspired by was helpful--- as my thoughts lead to the song by the Mary Jane Girls.
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30th Jan 2024 11:04am
Good Morning,
I saw your image appear just now. I decided to pull up your most recent poem. Wow, this is some hot erotica. Nicely worded and it flows beautifully. Awesome piece.
I saw your image appear just now. I decided to pull up your most recent poem. Wow, this is some hot erotica. Nicely worded and it flows beautifully. Awesome piece.
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