I might just ...

Not a fan of suicidal thoughts but like the spin. Leaving your mark, one way or another. Admiration for the ink, Punk.

fantastic rhyming

terrible sadness

who will bring hope to the hopeless if you are gone?

awesome work! <3

good write, well formed, thanks for posting:]

Pushed to the edge yet a hint of hope remains. Enjoyed it.

Very dark and descriptive ink...nice job.

Thanks.

Really touching, thanks for the write

nice...i have felt like that before. i can relate. well written

Honest and well written. Nice work. I won't give you a thumbs up for suicide, but writing about it reaches the minds of others who can relate. Well spoken, cemeterygirl

By no means pro suicide. I know a lot of people have similar suicidal feelings and thoughts but fight them  even when it's tempting to give in and give up but if you can hold on these feelings will pass and whether we can't see it then eventually thing's will be okay. Tomorrow is a new day.

Poetry is a great way to get your emotions out and express yourself.a Please continue to live on and write poetry for us to read. Thanks for sharing!

hell yeah. good poem.

Yuk! Glad you're still here, Foxx (news) ;-)

Happy to be here. 🦊

HELL YEAH!