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THE DIFFERENCE
We have known each other all our lives. Having never been touched by a man, sexy you decided too choose me too feel the difference. Potent smoke was being passed while having drinks in the hot tub. We're the best of friends, loving the same types of women. As we toasted, you gave me a passionate hug. Thanking me for years of friendship and never taking advantage. In mind I've always wanted too. As your warm, soft body pressed too me, your neck leans back and we kiss for the first time. EVER. Tongues so compatible, they fully soft swirl for a long while. Making the bubbles jealous. When we part, we sip. You say "The only thing better than this would be you eatin' my pussy". With clinking glasses and a kiss, I agree. Fondling breasts and sucking now hard nipples, you make no attempt too stop me. Just sweet moans lingering while caressing my dome. You Sssssss and exhale gasping as I kiss my way down to water level. I lift and sit you on the edge, too taste our new and improved friendship. Sexy hips stirred and shivered, loving my tongue on your vertical smile. I take my sweet time lick munching and devouring you slowly, filling your head with hot bliss, soaring. Furious clit lashes make you squirt some as the first orgasm is consumed. Shaking and whimpering, I kiss my tongue and lips too your honey drenched temple. Whirling tongue around your pebble hard clit. Clutching hands too head, you grunt and grind your honeypot into me breathing heavy. Rapidly rewarding me as orgasms two and three left no space in between. Pushing me away, you came again getting in the hot tub as we kissed passionately. We felt wonderful because it was about YOU, not me. Now taking our party inside, you chose me too feel the difference...
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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6th Feb 2014 4:55am
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6th Feb 2014 5:00am
Sometimes passion goes beyond platonic..
as usual you Lance takes the breath away.
as usual you Lance takes the breath away.
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6th Feb 2014 6:17am
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It' s that type of steamy sweet hot erotic passion that drew me to your poetry and has me always wanting more....
This piece is no different, so I love "The Difference".....GREAT WRITE!!!
This piece is no different, so I love "The Difference".....GREAT WRITE!!!
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6th Feb 2014 6:18am
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6th Feb 2014 7:44am
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and sit you on the edge, too taste our new and improved friendship. Sexy hips stirred and shivered, loving my tongue on your vertical smile. I take my sweet time lick munching and devouring you slowly, filling your head with hot bliss, soaring.
I need water
Hot
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Hot write .
and sit you on the edge, too taste our new and improved friendship. Sexy hips stirred and shivered, loving my tongue on your vertical smile. I take my sweet time lick munching and devouring you slowly, filling your head with hot bliss, soaring.
I need water
Hot
Hot
Hot write .
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6th Feb 2014 7:55am
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6th Feb 2014 8:11am
There is absolutely no doubt left in my mind now, having read all three of your "extreme" pieces that you're a MUCH better erotic artist than I've striven long and hard to be. Sigh! Some lucky people are just blessed with talent and can effortlessly dash off pieces of the ultimate erotic truth that take one's breath away. (Once a guy commented on seeing my photo, "You''re my Sex Goddess, Hare, Hare, I fall to my knees before you and kiss your lotus feet with my eyes closed because gazing upon you overlong would fry my retinas and short circuit my optic nerves with such highly charged longing for your touch that my brain would explode from love overload." How do guys spout off spontaneously flattery that could be the lyrics of a love ballad by Rita Chiarelli? ) My question is: Why are your writings labeled: "Extreme"? The sex is quite normal, no BDSM, no water sports, no violence, no anal, the only thing I find extreme is your talent! XD
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6th Feb 2014 8:19am
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6th Feb 2014 2:53pm
AHHhhh.....a bit of a unique approach to the idea of 'best friends with benefits! (gol!) ;)
Whew! This piece sets passion's flames ablaze...sizzling sensuality--to be sure!!
This lucky lady made the right choice, and that's what made ALL 'The Difference!'
Satisfaction guaranteed...and delivered--always--with you, Lance! xo
(Thanks for adjusting the thermostat....into the red zone intensity!)
Whew! This piece sets passion's flames ablaze...sizzling sensuality--to be sure!!
This lucky lady made the right choice, and that's what made ALL 'The Difference!'
Satisfaction guaranteed...and delivered--always--with you, Lance! xo
(Thanks for adjusting the thermostat....into the red zone intensity!)
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6th Feb 2014 6:09pm
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6th Feb 2014 4:19pm
"Tongues so compatible, they fully soft swirl for a long while"
Friends with benefits indeed-Excellence Lance!!!
Friends with benefits indeed-Excellence Lance!!!
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6th Feb 2014 6:12pm
Thanks Bro. SOUL!!!DA Man!!
I wrote a piece called Friends with Benefits
I wrote a piece called Friends with Benefits
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6th Feb 2014 6:43pm
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6th Feb 2014 7:04pm
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Master of the sexiest pieces, Lance, you are. Awesome write and so sensuous. Makes me think about my best friend ... Oh, no ... better not! Your experience was a nicer one, for sure.
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6th Feb 2014 8:25pm
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6th Feb 2014 10:49pm
Alright. Very good read, but I'm wondering. Who's gonna clean the hot tub? Lol
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6th Feb 2014 11:09pm
I can!! A lil bubbly in the water won't hurt! LMAO
Thanks man for stopping by!!
Thanks man for stopping by!!
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6th Feb 2014 11:27pm
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7th Feb 2014 2:48am
Damn bro. If this was a true account
I must say you sure lucked out big time!
Now you have officially gotten yourself
A FRIEND with BENEFITS! lol
Outstanding heat dude :)
I must say you sure lucked out big time!
Now you have officially gotten yourself
A FRIEND with BENEFITS! lol
Outstanding heat dude :)
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10th Feb 2014 2:32am
Funny you should say that, I've got a poem with that title. On page 5 in My Poems!!
Thanks again Bro.!!!!
Thanks again Bro.!!!!
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10th Feb 2014 12:23pm
I really like how you seemlessly shift one movement into another, its really good to see. and thanks heaps!
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16th Feb 2014 00:14am
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12th Feb 2014 3:34pm
So sensual and subtile as always, Lance. I love how you mix the passion and the elegance of making love
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16th Feb 2014 00:17am
Wow Long time no see sweets!!
You are missed greatly
I'm excited now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are missed greatly
I'm excited now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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16th Feb 2014 2:50am
par excellence Sir
if only wishes were horses
I'd like to be those smiling lips.....
but alas
not in this garb
but a lesson from you I do Learn
hope you will also
walk my page in turn
if only wishes were horses
I'd like to be those smiling lips.....
but alas
not in this garb
but a lesson from you I do Learn
hope you will also
walk my page in turn
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16th Feb 2014 2:58am
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18th Feb 2014 4:58am
Love the way you write! Especially "I kiss my tongue & lips too your honey drenched temple" i already loved it but that was the honey drizzle on top shall i say!?
Divine!
Divine!
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21st Feb 2014 2:36am
I really enjoy your ink as well Ms. Honey!!!
Thanxx Gorgeous I'm humbled!!
Thanxx Gorgeous I'm humbled!!
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22nd Feb 2014 4:58am
Its destined to happen at some point that best friends have the fantasy and what better way to have it then with mutual satisfaction
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22nd Feb 2014 5:02am
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22nd Feb 2014 11:14pm
Wow, sometimes best friends are the best lovers, nice and steamy glad I came to visit
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22nd Feb 2014 11:25pm
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5th Mar 2014 5:02pm
''Making the bubbles jealous. When we part, we sip. ''
Love those lines! I really like this poem.
Love those lines! I really like this poem.
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5th Mar 2014 5:06pm