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numb erred days innumer'able*(in streamin,steamin disconsciousness)
]*("sober"many decades,"taking"goodmedicine[soonlater]to make goodmornin,goodmoanin,goodmournin moreReal,tactile,visceral[/b][/font])>>>>>>>>>>>>
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old gang don't coma
a'round these
wherebyes any more(comma)
age'old no gang for a
NewAge gone stale almostly
alike oldage decrepididity as if one shat rolldown
pant(aloon) leg all stinky
'n'shit as if, as if again,
yr too close'pon death a'like
as if like y'died already backwhen
thee wee of I had th'ought he died
& all thee shees left &
like-as-if thee hees left too,
left right t'make ythink
y'ought die all over'gain,done(in)
right this time,butthenagain, ye
can no more count-on death to do
anymuch 'better' than th'livers
who stay a-live comporting'tween
thy great polar planes'o'selfcenter
frontcenter'd jusway wee must be
to compound goodbelief of that
runwaytrain metaforefronted[muchmoremuch]than
any'one(of'Us)could bloody'i'magine
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dkzkDrivellingToRazeFunsForDisPlacedPersons,pooms&delArteFotos
FOTO:="TooLateForEarly&LaterOn"by:dkzk2013oct
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old gang don't coma
a'round these
wherebyes any more(comma)
age'old no gang for a
NewAge gone stale almostly
alike oldage decrepididity as if one shat rolldown
pant(aloon) leg all stinky
'n'shit as if, as if again,
yr too close'pon death a'like
as if like y'died already backwhen
thee wee of I had th'ought he died
& all thee shees left &
like-as-if thee hees left too,
left right t'make ythink
y'ought die all over'gain,done(in)
right this time,butthenagain, ye
can no more count-on death to do
anymuch 'better' than th'livers
who stay a-live comporting'tween
thy great polar planes'o'selfcenter
frontcenter'd jusway wee must be
to compound goodbelief of that
runwaytrain metaforefronted[muchmoremuch]than
any'one(of'Us)could bloody'i'magine
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dkzkDrivellingToRazeFunsForDisPlacedPersons,pooms&delArteFotos
FOTO:="TooLateForEarly&LaterOn"by:dkzk2013oct
Published 19th Jan 2014
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20th Jan 2014 1:39am
21st Jan 2014 12:35pm
21st Jan 2014 1:36am
driving heavy machinery is the least of anyone's worries, they should put your poem as a warning label on those pills, er um life, we all is swallowing every day
21st Jan 2014 3:12am
21st Jan 2014 2:00pm
21st Jan 2014 2:05pm
no codes, kid
this is thee reallyreal basic hyperultra true reality of It All ---
(paralyzingly frightening, ain't it?)(of'course, juskiddin, yknow?)
thank ye for dropping in , pal....
21st Jan 2014 2:08pm
21st Jan 2014 2:21pm
"I may stop by again."
that could be 'yOur problem', or
'yOur salvation'....but
no
body 'knows', de'spite how bloody vehemently as wee may insist on
wasting our life-blood
for the indulgence of
spewin Our Sacred Precious O'pinions....
butt eye could be dead[&/or]wrong
that could be 'yOur problem', or
'yOur salvation'....but
no
body 'knows', de'spite how bloody vehemently as wee may insist on
wasting our life-blood
for the indulgence of
spewin Our Sacred Precious O'pinions....
butt eye could be dead[&/or]wrong
21st Jan 2014 2:26pm
21st Jan 2014 3:51pm
just pseudo cosmicomedy stuck in a surreal brainmind.
nothing special
