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Re: Take Me
18th Jan 2014 6:50am
Re: Take Me
6th Feb 2014 10:36pm
If I give it to you raw make sure to give it to me wet. Good read. Keep it going.
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Re: Take Me
7th Mar 2014 2:10pm
Great flow, reads real smooth. Love the perspective of this write. Hard promises with soft words, a sense of urgency tied up in need.
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