Pauper of starstuff

A splendid write, evoking beautiful imageries...Good read Soul, and Good Luck in the competition.

Thank You for seeing it Dear Grace-Grateful Always!!!

Great title.
the poem itself is very well written
totally dig it

though I doubt you will need it ;)
good luck in the comp

You are very kind Nikki, Thank You!!!-we need those dreams eh?

Shining your light in this magical write....
Enjoyed, as always!

:D Thank You kind Dear Queen!!!

..go head on Picasso! :) Fabulous write, my Soul! You've painted another beautiful work of art! Xo

There She is being overly-kind :) Thank You Dear Rain for coming by!!!

Very well thought of concluding lines:
"Tonight's cascading dreams take flight."
Dig it!

/EngrVV

Appreciated Engr.!!!
Always honoured when You drop in Sir!!!

A captivating visual and most beautiful pen Soul. :)

Thank You Dear Magdalena!!!-I've been in a rut and winter stealing my precious time and energy....ready for spring now...

Lots of Fire in that pen Bro. SOUL!!
Great luck in the comp!!!!

Sir Lancelott

Greatly appreciate You Lance!!!

Love your use of language here, soul. The colours are great for image and your flow is seamless. check night's in the last stanza, other than that I have no real suggestions or constructive-ness to add

great stuff  shine on

Greatly appreciated Lepp.!!!
I've not had enough moments of stillness here of late...that was my attempt at finding some...I have a hard time liking anything I write...shortly after posting I'm hit with woulda, shoulda, coulda...days later looking again it's almost cringe-worthy :D
Always appreciate Your support and keen eye Sir!!!

slick poetry. stuff of dreams, that evades our grasp, & keeps us all paupers...

Indeed it does-Appreciated John!!!

This is gorgeous of a write Soul.
Exquisite language brilliantly crafted.  I'm always impressed when one is able to pull great metaphors and this certainly is exceptional.

I appreciate that much Vee!!!
You are too kind!!!

woven with a wordsmiths ease in praise of light and night - very pleasing to read, much enjoyed

Humbled-Greatly appreciate You swinging by!!!

Thank You always for Your support and Friendship Gabe-It's Always good to see You here :D

Quite awesome.

:) Thank You Atar!!!
Appreciate You visiting me and such a kind comment!!!

Wow an overdose of imagination my dear friend !  
Very nice ink....

Always good to see You Cesar-Thank You Kind Friend!!

This is truly an impressive work, souladareatease, luv :-* ~

I think what most captivates me is the sweeping imagery that moves throughout in a cascade of energy and never ceases from swells of motion initially with the painting and billowing and blanketing to the hurling of rocks and beads and precious pearls to glimmers of light and tears that motion is restless and constant yet part of the natural flow of the world, part of the goddess. Yea, part of the cycle of sleep and rest and dreaming...

You are truly a most magnificent poet, Sir.

I appreciate Your kindness and time Savaja!!!
That Truly is the time of magic-Thank You so much for Your visit:)

I really got caught up in the way you describe a human and then go onto to the environment surrounding the person

Thank You for catching that Jazz ;)
Appreciate Your visits Much Good Sir!!!

me also thinks that "pauper" is one of those terms like "hobo" that very few younger people know the meaning of. I know in the case of "hobo", there is a song by Woody Guthrie, "Hobo's Lullaby" that students from 4 to 24 are always asking me about after I sing it to them. Some even think I made it up.

Indeed-Wonderful song...truly that man was magic wasn't he?
that is awesome You share that with folks...people don't know what they miss until one shares heritage ...certain things should never be allowed to die.
I spent a lot of my youth riding rails meeting different hobos..,(it was still easy to hop on back in those days)a couple I befriended would be seasonal visits for a few years-one in particular from Canada...was true to the classic sense, he played harp (harmonica I mean:) sung songs beat on everything in sight...neat fellow-had the most interesting stories...I met a few who were downright scary (and at my age of early teens-quite intimidating)...I've been seeing reprisals of folk music here and there....little pocket societies...a lot are filtering in from Ireland too...its a grand thing to see simplicity embraced with fervor...most of my summer days are spent with acoustics or some form of acoustic music around me...apologies for the long ramble there hahaha

I never had the experience of riding the rails like a hobo but I can say some of the most unique people I have met have been on train trips

As a young teen without a car or money...it was the perfect way out of my one horse town (I could walk two-three miles and be lucky to have a car pass me by)Back then Frederick (Where Vic is) was the toddlin' town...catch a ride to another train then take either the one toward big lights...or the other towards more country...my grandfather worked a roundhouse...spent many hours there as well....now its a museum...(the most unique names I ever heard were from hobos...Jamar ...seemed to my young mind a name from a fantasy novel

ah another connection to Vic!

He's going to become the next Kevin Bacon isn't he? :D

has he shaved the mustache yet?

:D I couldn't say

You are so excellent! everything I have read of you, makes my fingertips run across the  page. You're the freshness of airs. Oo my, suits mind and heart
the vividness.

Lovely written darling

Careful, you'll make my head swell with such kind comments :)
I really appreciate You, for digging through the vaults HW!!!
Indeed this was an emotion driven Write- thank You again!!!