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Scratch The Surface
Looking through the glass in wonder
My feelings foreign, completely disconnected from me
Nervous energy, angry aggression have taken their place.
Scratching the surface of emotion
Skating across them like a frozen pond, doing figure eights
My words not making sense.
Like my feelings seem to be stuck in the muck
Blathering on,
To keep thoughts at bay.
Death, life, eternity
I fail daily at making sense of the world around me
No where to go with this.
I won't break through
I'll scratch the surface
Leave the rest to bleed through.
My feelings foreign, completely disconnected from me
Nervous energy, angry aggression have taken their place.
Scratching the surface of emotion
Skating across them like a frozen pond, doing figure eights
My words not making sense.
Like my feelings seem to be stuck in the muck
Blathering on,
To keep thoughts at bay.
Death, life, eternity
I fail daily at making sense of the world around me
No where to go with this.
I won't break through
I'll scratch the surface
Leave the rest to bleed through.
Published 13th Feb 2011
| Edited 17th Feb 2011
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14th Feb 2011 2:09am
14th Feb 2011 2:18am
Anonymous
15th Feb 2011 4:15am
I really admire your work.
15th Feb 2011 5:02am
Thank you I try.. :) your comments are really appreciated..and you are talented and honest in your work..I love that..peace Crimsin :)
16th Feb 2011 6:02pm
and for reasons such as this. A familiar feeling written well. Don't mind me i'll just be browsing your catalogue.
16th Feb 2011 7:58pm
12th Dec 2017 8:05pm
Even as you sound uninspired you ignite a brilliant fire. The sense of hopelessness you convey is also threaded with the knowledge that this condition is only temporary. Very thoughtful and lovely.
David
David
12th Dec 2017 8:18pm
thank you dearest David
for such a gracious comment
that gifted me smiles today :)
I deeply appreciate your insight
& visit to my pages..
love Brenda
for such a gracious comment
that gifted me smiles today :)
I deeply appreciate your insight
& visit to my pages..
love Brenda
